Comments | gryphonrhi: X-Files/Eroica story posted to the Eyrie

gryphonrhi

X-Files/Eroica story posted to the Eyrie

Sep 15, 2005 08:47

Fair and Dark is now on my web site, tidied up and with graphics. ::g:: Yes, I'm shallow like that. Sorry ( Read more... )

fandoms: eroica, fanfic, crossovers, fandoms: x-files, fic: postings

Comments 19

Beatles station: avivasedai September 15 2005, 14:03:15 UTC

The one in my head right now is "Cherry Lane" - that's the right street name, right? I could sing the melody but I don't know the lyrics.

Re: Beatles station: gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:10:28 UTC

::interested:: Penny Lane you mean? Or it might be a different song.

Nope, that's it. avivasedai September 15 2005, 18:12:52 UTC

Yeah, not so good with the Beatles lyrics. My bad. I should go look that up, so at least I can put that song down for the day.

Re: Nope, that's it. gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:22:13 UTC

::laughing:: Good luck getting it out of your head, then.

Harrison's "Here Comes the Sun" ann_i_blessing September 15 2005, 14:09:25 UTC

But I don't know why. If beta consists of proofreading for typos and basic readability, I can do that. I proof galleys for my professor.

Re: Harrison's "Here Comes the Sun" gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:15:56 UTC

::laughing:: Among other things, yes. ::cheerful:: Shall I send the HL fic, then? (The XF/Buffy 1. isn't done and 2. direly needs a beta for Buffy canon.)

Re: Harrison's "Here Comes the Sun" ann_i_blessing September 15 2005, 18:26:46 UTC

Certainly, and I'll try to get a quick turnaround for you. I'm gearing up for the new quarter next week, so I'm so organized people who know me wouldn't believe it!

Re: HThis Mortal Coil gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:30:59 UTC

Bless you, dear, it's on the way in gmail.

Ali, if you read this, I copied you on it, o brave person who's said she'll beta for me on no notice....

feonixrift September 15 2005, 17:41:25 UTC

First paragraph, "or greeting" looks like it ought be "of greeting".

(Yeah, I find nits and pick at them, sorry. Loved the story.)

gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:08:38 UTC

::laughing:: Hey, better my friends tell me than any enemies. Thank you, kind lady, I'll fix it and repost. ::cheerful:: Glad you enjoyed it!

gryphonrhi September 15 2005, 18:09:33 UTC

Ah! No, that *isn't* a typo. I may need to reverse the order, but no one's sure which she means by the gesture.

feonixrift September 15 2005, 18:16:05 UTC

My bad, it does read properly once I fall into the flow of the style. Apologies.

Thread 5

caithion October 4 2005, 22:28:05 UTC

I really enjoyed this story! I don't know much at all about X-Files canon, but I've read enough fanfic that I know a bit of who Alex is. Lovely look inside Dorian's head!

One thing I did notice though, was how often you referred to the "husky" or "lazy" voice. Was that an attempt to clue in the reader that it wasn't really Mulder?

gryphonrhi October 4 2005, 23:08:53 UTC

I had a great time writing that as a crossover, and was surprised at just how much fun Dorian is to write. ::grinning:: Thank you for letting me know you liked it!

(Sounds like I need to edit that... husky is definitely Alex. Lazy might be either of them. ::amused:: But yes, I wanted the reader wondering who was using the name. Hope it worked for you.)

Thanks again!

caithion October 5 2005, 16:09:50 UTC

I loved how you sort of sprang the change of identity on us, I think that worked great! I guess I didn't really pick up on the husky clue, but I'm sure that was lack of fandom knowledge.

I'm glad you liked writing Dorian, maybe you'll write him again?

This Mortal Coil anonymous October 13 2005, 05:01:57 UTC

Good story, Rhi! Very well written. I certainly enjoyed it. It was a treat to be reading you again. I've missed you! Hope you will do more Highlander. *Love* Cory Raines!!

Marilyn

Re: This Mortal Coil gryphonrhi October 13 2005, 17:44:56 UTC

::g:: Glad you enjoyed it! Isn't Cory a hoot?