What's In a Kiss, chapter 6 - part II

Jul 21, 2008 20:55

Title: What's In a Kiss
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing: Peter/Susan, non-incestuous
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He always leaves her with a kiss. This Chapter - When Narnia celebrates an anniversary for the end of the White Witch's reign, a few of the visitors cause Susan to look at her siblings differently.
Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6-I
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chaptered fic, fandom: chronicles of narnia, peter/susan, rating: pg-13

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gryff_of_grace July 24 2008, 16:33:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

It's interesting that you think it was more flowery than the others, 'cause I thought the opposite. I thought it was a bit more depressing, actually, what with Edmund being not-on-purpose rough with Susan and Lucy being moody. I guess in my attempt to make it more light-hearted I got rid of a lot of the darkness, which is a good thing. Especially since some of the future chapters are going to be the exact opposite of flowery. ;)

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gryff_of_grace July 24 2008, 16:43:06 UTC
Ohhhh, okay. LOL. Yeah, it was a bit flowery - I blame your beta. ;)

Btw, I finally got the first volume of Avatar in the mail! I hope to watch a couple of the eps tomorrow. :)

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gryff_of_grace July 31 2008, 20:21:47 UTC
Ha, I'm glad you liked this so much! I just had to have a drunk Peter. He's so much fun. :D

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angelicdawn August 27 2008, 14:55:36 UTC
"you could look like a dog for all I care. "
I love Ed.

What a great story! It really showed the warm, soft relationships of the Pevensies. Your writing is absolutely wonderful!

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gryff_of_grace September 18 2008, 19:12:00 UTC
Ed is a fantastic character. :)

I'm so glad you liked this chapter and the relationships between the Pevensies. I don't know if you've read the next chapter, but it's up!

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