Title: What's In a Kiss
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing: Peter/Susan, non-incestuous
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He always leaves her with a kiss. This Chapter - When Narnia celebrates an anniversary for the end of the White Witch's reign, a few of the visitors cause Susan to look at her siblings differently.
Previous Chapters:
1,
2,
3,
4,
5,
6-IA
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It's interesting that you think it was more flowery than the others, 'cause I thought the opposite. I thought it was a bit more depressing, actually, what with Edmund being not-on-purpose rough with Susan and Lucy being moody. I guess in my attempt to make it more light-hearted I got rid of a lot of the darkness, which is a good thing. Especially since some of the future chapters are going to be the exact opposite of flowery. ;)
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Btw, I finally got the first volume of Avatar in the mail! I hope to watch a couple of the eps tomorrow. :)
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I love Ed.
What a great story! It really showed the warm, soft relationships of the Pevensies. Your writing is absolutely wonderful!
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I'm so glad you liked this chapter and the relationships between the Pevensies. I don't know if you've read the next chapter, but it's up!
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