[Fandom] Scars updated and OMG I'm dead

[grownupneko]

I feel so dead. I stayed up while 2am finishing that Scars chapter last night >< It's not as high quality as I would have liked, but I guess the first half of the chapter could support the somewhat less well-written second half. Luckily the next chapter is an interlude that allows me some breathing room to charge my angst batteries.

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[rsasai]

Don't you know, everything has to do with what your character's wearing! That's why every story must involve a detailed description of exactly what color your pants are, the placement of those holes, and whether or not they're boxers of briefs. You just don't understand the specifics of writing good characters! Their clothes need to tell me something about--

Fuck it. I can't even try to be serious. It's a cop-out for bad writers.

[grownupneko]

XD

And I really wanted to see Sephiroth getting dominated by Cloud in a really sick and twisted way. All I got was a school boy idea of BDSM and a description of Cloud's white mage costume.

[rsasai]

That's an insult to all white mages in the history of white mages.

You may have more luck checking the kink meme. I'm sure there's some there.

[grownupneko]

When in doubt, check the kink meme XD