[Fandom] Scars updated and OMG I'm dead
I feel so dead. I stayed up while 2am finishing that Scars chapter last night >< It's not as high quality as I would have liked, but I guess the first half of the chapter could support the somewhat less well-written second half. Luckily the next chapter is an interlude that allows me some breathing room to charge my angst batteries.
Formspring questions are exceedingly RANDOM guys. SERIOUSLY ILU <3
I have no idea who Anonymouse is BTW, but I'm getting suspicious and think they must be on my Flist.
I got all excited about this fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5964682/1/Domination and then got a few sentences in and a part of me died a little to read this:
Was he the top candidate in the Pre-Solider Recruitment Program? Without a doubt. He had been a standout even at the opening orientation. The boy had come to the event dressed in a pure white leather coat and white leather pants with a silk white shirt. His boot was made out of white snake skin and a huge pale sword that had far too many parts sat on his back.
It's a shame. Until the pre-ocupation with Cloud's random outfit change, it was a pretty decent premise. Now I can't get it out of my head that they used such blatently bad writing techniques to show Cloud is meant to be different in this fic. It might still be worth a read but that sentence really turned me off.
Ugh. Does anyone want to do my Ancient Sumerian revision for me? No? >
Formspring questions are exceedingly RANDOM guys. SERIOUSLY ILU <3
I have no idea who Anonymouse is BTW, but I'm getting suspicious and think they must be on my Flist.
I got all excited about this fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5964682/1/Domination and then got a few sentences in and a part of me died a little to read this:
Was he the top candidate in the Pre-Solider Recruitment Program? Without a doubt. He had been a standout even at the opening orientation. The boy had come to the event dressed in a pure white leather coat and white leather pants with a silk white shirt. His boot was made out of white snake skin and a huge pale sword that had far too many parts sat on his back.
It's a shame. Until the pre-ocupation with Cloud's random outfit change, it was a pretty decent premise. Now I can't get it out of my head that they used such blatently bad writing techniques to show Cloud is meant to be different in this fic. It might still be worth a read but that sentence really turned me off.
Ugh. Does anyone want to do my Ancient Sumerian revision for me? No? >