Brigits_Flame Feb.Week One

[greenwillow27]

Title: Keeping Warm
Prompt: "Thank you"
Word Ct: 830
A/N: Short, sweet, no warnings

Comments

[jem0000000]

Awwww! How cute! :)

One thing -- in the second paragraph, you refer to a bundle on his back, but you call it a pack for the remainder of the story.

I love the way you've worked in tiny hints about his past, and the detailed descriptions of the things that matter to him. :)

And I like that he refuses to abandon his dog. :)

[greenwillow27]

Ah yes. Good point. I should keep that consistent. I think it was because his bundle didn't morph into a backpack until I needed him to unzip a zipper...;o)

Thank you, Jem, as always, for the feedback! Truly appreciate it!

[jem0000000]

Lol, I thought it might be one of those morphing sorts of bundles! ;)

You're welcome. It was fun to read. :)

[greenwillow27]

Thank you!
=oD

[belluminabyssus]

Aw, how poignant and sweet -- I'm a sucker for animal stories. Good luck this week!

[greenwillow27]

Thank you! I actually tend to avoid animal stories cuz they always make me cry. But this one kinda wrote itself.

[keppiehed]

The end was perfect. He was so kind! Excellently done.

[greenwillow27]

Thank you!
I should probably post the photo that gave me the ending, but then it'd be pretty obvious how little "writing" I did. ;o)

[oryginal_skin]

Yeah, the ending was especially good.

[greenwillow27]

Thank you!