Putting the Fün Back in Dysfünctional (6/6)

[greenthumb421]

Putting the Fün Back in Dysfünctional

Author: greenthumb421
Artist: annartism

Summary: Laughing used to come easy to the Winchester boys.Sometimes Sam thinks they'll never really laugh again. Sam n' Dean, worn down by Bobby's death, Sam's hallucinations of Lucifer, lack of sleep, and the (temporary) loss of the Impala, decide to take a week or two off from hunting, rest up

Comments

[scarletscarlet]

I laughed out loud so many times I lost count :). There was SO MUCH glorious brotherly-banter in here! Enormous fun, and your OCs were really engaging and neat :). The undercurrent of Sam's hell issues was a nice counter to the hilarity. I really enjoyed this! I woke up an hour or so before my alarm, so it was nice to have the first BB to read.

[greenthumb421]

"Enormous fun" <---- How cool is that??? Thank you so much, that really is great to hear, since that's exactly what I was aiming for. Thank you for reading and commenting!

[greenthumb421]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm still a bit meh about my description of the Pittsburgh accent, but hey, first time fanfic writer here, no one's expecting Hemingway.
Thanks for reading and commenting! It's much appreciated.

[blacksomnatten]

You are absolutely right. The Winchester definitely needs to laugh more.

With the show having been kind of depressing for a while this was an real delight to read. This kind of brotherly affection and funny banter was exactly what drew me to the show in the first place. And I've missed it, and your story brought it back in spades.

Laughed out load so many times: The Petrified Burrito, the murse Tiffany, the kissing scene from Spiderman 1, Sam hitting on a lesbian with "bite me", the tributes to Mel Brooks and so so much more.

The case was well thought of and thrilling. The demon hyenas were excellent villains - very scary and menacing. Having to face them in a dark attic - no thank you!

Loved it! Thanks for sharing<3

[greenthumb421]

"This kind of brotherly affection and funny banter was exactly what drew me to the show in the first place." <------THIS!!!
That's exactly what I was aiming for, bringing back the fun of watching early season Winchester brothers who still LIKE each other.
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[somer]

A minute or so into the story I started giggling and chuckling like mad AND THEN I COULDN'T FUCKING STOP! This was awesome! :D

The banter, the I-know-what-you-want-say, Dean cheating on the Impala, Sam's sideburns and choking, the reason for the vacation (The Laugh)...

I very much enjoyed this! Thank you for writing it :)

[greenthumb421]

Very cool that I could make you laugh out loud, hopefully in public places where people gave you odd looks! *evil grin*
I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for commenting, it's much appreciated!

[kelhome]

Really, really enjoyable. Thanks so much for the delightful read.

[greenthumb421]

Thank you for reading, and for commenting. :D