Angel... maybe not - ZERO x Shou

[greenmoon666]

Title: Angel... maybe not
Authour: Dana
Pairing: Zero x Shou (+D'espairsRay+ & alice nine.)
Rating: NC-17 really!!!!
Warnings: Yaoi, angst, non beta, kinky sex, crack...
Genre: Angst, yaoi
Disclaimer: I own nothing and make no profit with this
Written for: konbon_person

Comments

[ai4jui]

HOMGS XDDD This was very lovely! Never could have seen them coming but damn XDDD

Very good! I enjoy it lots!

[greenmoon666]

^_^ Thank you!

[greenmoon666]

Ow~ You're welcome honey! <3

[susaricah]

yes, asphyxiation can lead to death but that's mainly because it is done without enough necessary cautiousness then. there would not be such thing as "erotic asphyxiation" if people never did it. I very much appreciate you put a warning here, though. one can never know what people are about to do. I like this pairing you chose and the kink you chose but I'm not entirely comfortable with the way you worked it out. Mainly because you chose for Zero to say that his main reason was to scare Shou with his actions and not to give him pleasure. I think it was good that Zero tried to relax Shou, that was important. and I think that your Muses are very in character and that your writing style is also nice and hot ^^
do you know chantrea_johari? maybe you want to read about how she embbed this kink exemplary in her writing, for example her sexual beasts saga. ^_^

[greenmoon666]

Originally it was supposed to be the really thing. And it turned out kinda dark but I loved it.
However when I sent it to my friend to reread it, just because I never post yaoi without him reading, him being gay and all. He reminded me of very important thing: most people who read fanfiction are very young. So I kinda freaked out and even thought about not posting the thing at all. But I promised Ren a fic so I had to, and since it's fic for someone I wasn't too sure if she would enjoy the real "erotic asphyxiation" fic.
Yeah, I did in the end take a nice dark fic and completely ruined it... I know and to some extent I regret it. After all I'm a girl who wrote two long mpreg fics.... But it's ok, I can always write new fiction. ^_^ There will always be a need in me to write the dark & the angsty & the kinky. <3

[susaricah]

Ah, I see :D
So that's why~
Yeah it would not make much sense to write a fic for someone with a topic about which you know that the other doesn't like (or are not sure)
It's true that many readers are very young, I tend to forget that myself ^^'
But if you label your fanfiction properly (like you did) there is no need to freak out, I think. If you continue to write about this I'd be interested in reading more from you ^_^

[greenmoon666]

I think this one will stay a oneshot... X) don't really know how I would continue it.
I have written fics before and I shall write again. ^_^ <3 *whisper* one of the first fics I wrote had some kinky stuff in it (not the mpreg) and I got totally flamed on some sites... That whole thing has left a bitter aftertaste, so know I know that even with clear warnings there are some who tend to read what they don't approve of and then take their rage out on authors... >_>''' people can be so limited sometimes...

[greenmoon666]

Thanks~ Kama Sutra hehehehe~

[greenmoon666]

OMG! ^_^ Me? Lol~ Thank you honey! I added you my f-list too. X3
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