Remorse - Chapter 4

[greenmoon666]

Title: Remorse
Authour: Dana
Pairing: AoixUruha
Rating: NC-17 - to be safe
Warnings: Yaoi, mpreg, non beta
Genre: Angst, med terms, mpreg, yaoi
Disclaimer: I own nothing and make no profit with this

Comments

[kasabaka]

I'm not really sure what a beta is but I'm guessing it's a person who corrects your spelling and grammar? If it is, I'd be glad to be your beta. I love your way of writing xD...Smut-tastic? :]

Great chapter <3 Do continue.

[greenmoon666]

T_T I know it's annoying to put up with my bad english but I really have little patience with beta. Thank you so much for offering thought! You rock!!! *hugs tight* <3

[kasabaka]

No, it's not your english. Your english is veryyyy close to perfect :]..just I think "new" readers of yours wouldn't understand so well on the story if they couldn't make it out. I have alot of time to spend on correcting things but yeah, if you ever need one....I'm here for you <333.

Time to add as friends o-o

[schuldig28]

yayayayayayayayayayayayayaaaaaayyyyyyyy
X3

[greenmoon666]

Oh yeah! X3

[seungjea]

Aaah! I've been waiting for this!!!

“You know, you are not so young this time. You might stay fat. You won’t be able to snap back to your original weight so easily.” --> ah ruki ... ^^;; he'd get more than just a glare for that! but he's right, uru has to say goodbye to all his fav wine and alcohol when he's pregnant! ^^

thank you for a great chapter, is it going to be over soon?

[greenmoon666]

*nods* Yup-yup! Over soon, only one or two chapters to. XD
Thank you! *kidnaps you* XP

[gazerockyo]

babe...u know i love you right?! more cuteness...i didn't get a chance to comment on ur reixmyv....i was in class agian xD but it made me cry in the end....bad rei!! aww...but still so cute *pet rei*...*huggles* is this close enough to a hug for more update really quick? *hugs more*

[greenmoon666]

hehehehe~! Sowy if I made you cry!! *hugs&kisses* Will post the next part of that fic today if all goes well! X3

[realm_of_ravenx]

So happy he got preggy! And wants to meet his other daughter. So sweet.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

[greenmoon666]

I feel the same way. But I'm kind lazy at the moment... maybe it will take me a while to get the next chapy ready... maybe... dunno... XD