Remorse - Chapter 1

[greenmoon666]

Title: Remorse
Authour: Dana
Pairing: AoixUruha
Rating: NC-17 (for safety)
Warnings: Yaoi, mpreg, non beta
Genre: Angst, smut, med terms, mpreg, yaoi
Disclaimer: I own nothing and make no profit with this.

Comments

[xx_reita_san_xx]

oo...
poor Urusha))
is it will be a sad story?

[greenmoon666]

ya know I'm a sucker for happy endings! X3

[xx_reita_san_xx]

i don't like happy end)
write more as posible soon)
i like your stories *blush*

[greenmoon666]

hehehe~ thank you sweetie!

[mypi]

hey its started quiet interesting :D i'll wait for next chapter to tell ya my opinion,k ?

[greenmoon666]

T_T that sounds scary.... O_o

[mypi]

hehe :D don't worry i just don't wanna give to early opinion :) but so far i like it, is that better? *hugs*

[sukinayaoides]

hmm, i like how you decided to revisit the whole mpreg concept.
its so interesting!
and i like how the situation is almost the opposite of the other fic.. with Uruha not wanting the baby at first, but Aoi did..
poor Uruha.. is he going to meet his daughter? wow.. that..is going to be angsty*
im already enthralled with this:D
cant wait to read more!

[greenmoon666]

hehehe... I can't tell what is going to happen... ^_^
Sowy~
and thank you honey!! *hugs*

[buuberry]

you wrote another! (squeals) X)

awww... wat a sad beginning. poor uru. -pats pats- i dont blame him for feeling that way. poor aoi too! being kicked out of the entire thing.

do continue! -cookies- =)

[greenmoon666]

will continue! X3 don't see why not... but this one will be shorter. ;) Thanks!!!!

[crimsonmind]

yay! im excited this got posted! i was anticipating it! i really loved the other one and couldn't wait to hear this one but now....oh my! it sounds...not so fluffy happy like i figured it would be. but like you said, you don't wanna repeat too much i guess. which is a good thing. and uruha and natural birth *evil laugh*...then again...*pets his head* poor ru-ru! ah well, i still love it. your last fic was great and im sure this one will be too. ooo another great mpreg pair just popped in my head! but im not goona go off spouting abouit another fic. we'll wait till this one is done XD i really look forward to this! ...okay im done babbling.

[greenmoon666]

Thank you!!! I think I'm gonna get off the mpreg a bit after this fic... XD

[crimsonmind]

haha yeah i was just overly excited and had a million thoughts running through my head at the time. its not like im gonna depend on you to start writing mpregs for every pairing XD i just happen to think of a cute one in my head. and im excited that good fics (well, this one at least ^_^ ) is being written as school is ending so ill finally have time to read them when i wish and finish a whole chapter in one sitting lol (which is alot of the reason i didn't get to comment much on your last one...i had to print it out and run)