Okay, so I posted a version of this thing over a year ago, but I've reworked it, (ETA: I took the advise of theevilgenius  and edited some more, as of 2/14) and I'm thinking of submitting it to the literary magazine thing on campus.  Read it, let me know what you think, any problems you see.  Also, suggestions for a better title would be muchly appreciated.

( Milkshakes and summer smiles )

green_eyes29321's Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level: 8Average number of words per sentence:15.96Average number of syllables per word:1.49Total words in sample:431Another fun meme brought to you by rfreebern

Yay! My LJ is a middle schooler!