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erotic

Apr 22, 2008 13:25

PlatypusYour pink cowboy hat is my vagina ( Read more... )

dean young

Comments 4

little_lady_d April 22 2008, 19:55:15 UTC

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nosyparker April 22 2008, 23:49:09 UTC

Wow -- I read this poem a few times over again to see if I would dislike it a little less, but...nope, still not doing it for me.

annani April 23 2008, 08:04:21 UTC

me too. that's actually a poem?

brassdaughter April 24 2008, 07:59:10 UTC

I like "an orgasm is a spaceship." Kind of. Actually, I almost like the poem from that line on, the second half there.
But I dunno. It certainly gets a reaction right off the bat.