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"Biscuits" for debriswoman (DDE 2013)

Dec 29, 2013 19:35

Title: Biscuits
Author: eanor
Fandom: Cabin Pressure
Characters: Arthur Shappey, Martin Crieff, Douglas Richardson
Rating: G
Words: 222
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: Arthur remembers something.
Author's Notes: For debriswoman. You asked for "memories from revisiting a place/building from childhood". I hope you like what I have done with ( Read more... )

character: douglas richardson, fandom: cabin pressure, december drabble exchange 2013, rating: g, character: martin crieff, character: arthur shappey, author: eanor

Comments 5

litlover12 December 30 2013, 02:59:11 UTC

One word . . . brilliant! :-)

imbecamiel December 30 2013, 03:09:32 UTC

Awww, so cute and funny! I'm very impressed with your ability to keep everything clear without any description or dialogue tags, as well. Great characterization, there!

gardnerhill December 31 2013, 06:04:46 UTC

That was downright Proustian of Arthur, wasn't it? "And then I dunked my biscuit into my tea - what are those roundish, shellish biscuits called again, Manatees?"

capt_facepalm January 2 2014, 21:08:53 UTC

Look at all the lovely dialogue!

Brilliant!

goldvermilion87 January 9 2014, 05:36:55 UTC

I laughed out loud at this! The voices are perfect!