Review #1

[grantmewords]

Wherein I take the time to examine the flaws of my writing, and my general bad habits.

1. Jaggedness

There seems to be a lack of flow between sentences, a trait of my writing that I'm least proud of. Mostly I think it's because I tend to think of one scene, then jump to the next, and often the thread that links it all together is lost due to that.

Comments

[xcry]

Hey now, you're not the only one that goes through this. I seriously think you're a waaay better writer than I am.
OMG, I see you put a semi-colin instead of a comma!! FLAW!
seriously, I didn't see one flaw in your ficlets so far.

I use lots of "blinking, pouting, furrowing, quirking, crossing, etc" words in my stuff. Ahaha. Thus we go to the thesaurus for synonyms. xD.
But you know, it's the original, new plotline//idea that counts, so we'll let you slide. =D.

Anyway, I hope to see more from you! <3

I hope I didn't offend you in anyway, just you know..posting my own opinions.

[grantmewords]

Nope, I'm not offended at all. Plus you made me feel lots better. <3 But I guess I just posted this so that I can be clear about how to improve in the future. :)

Come on now! You have your own strengths. Plot-wise you take characters a lot further, and the little tidbits I'm sure you garnered from real-life interviews is real fun to read. ^^