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Mar 02, 2009 14:52



Don't Cross the Line, It's Aimed At You

Rating: NC17
Status: Incomplete
A/N&Disclaimer: Did not steal anything.  Quotes are by Sonia Sanchez, the title was inspired by Kpop band "Nell".

You click me because curiosity tells you to... )

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feigningintrest March 15 2009, 19:34:09 UTC
Wow!.... That was.... I'm not exactly sure I know what just happened. The visual, while very disturbing, was really well presented. It made me think of trainspotting which is one of my all time favorite movies.

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grannycrunk March 16 2009, 03:05:33 UTC
tytyTY. :3
i'm going to have to watch trainspotting now.
again, thankyou.

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Love! imogen_penn March 16 2009, 17:34:59 UTC
I am a fangirl for you! I love your crazy stream of conciousness style. This feels totally real, like fucked up post traumatic stress war brats. It makes me want to try for something gritty and not so happy instead of the fluff that seems to come spewing out of me at an alarming rate :) But then I remember that other people (aka you) do it so much better ( ... )

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Re: Love! grannycrunk March 17 2009, 04:27:19 UTC
THANKYOU!!!!!!!
This: "I am a fangirl for you!", this: "I love it like crack", this: "And friending in the hopes of more literary awesomeness!", and everything in between, made my day :3

i will work on the narrative vs. consciousness. & I'll friend you back.

again, tytytytytyty.

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