Voldemort wins....

Apr 28, 2008 02:07

Title: In Dreams
Challenge: Voldemort wins.
Team: Spying for... da Order
Rating: PG-13
Char.: HG, SS. Voldemort
Word count.: 4 x 100
A/N OMG the start of this is darker than my normal drabbles, this might also double up for Hermione's Bad Day.
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savine_snape, hermione's bad day challenge

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m_mcgonagall_65 April 28 2008, 01:27:28 UTC
You had me going through the first three of those. What a relief! It was only a bad dream!

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:22:19 UTC
Sorry!

I did warn that it was a darker opening than my usual drabbles.

I blame being on-call and answering the bleep to dunderhead doctors. B'ah humbug, Sav is in a snarky mood.

*hugs*

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sbrande April 28 2008, 01:30:31 UTC
Brilliant! Just one smallish mistake...

'Turning slightly to face he swept the sweat soaked hair from her face.'
I think you meant her instead of he.

Loved it though.

Love Sonia :)

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:20:46 UTC
Thanks for pointing that little error out :D

Its darker than my usual stuff, but I actually really enjoyed writing this one.

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zyra321 April 28 2008, 01:37:18 UTC
War survivors are going to have to face through some period of nightmare, especially when your loved ones were a spy.

It's so like Hermione to fear for Severus. Love it! :)

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:19:38 UTC
*blushes*
Thank you. This is a departure for me, I usually write nice fluffy drabbles but I was bitten by a rabid bunny in between calls to my bleep.

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zyra321 April 28 2008, 02:55:58 UTC
Ah, well.

One can't choose which bunny to get bitten by. I hope this bunny didn't leave any irreparable damage to your fluffy heart. :)

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 03:51:49 UTC
Oh no I still have a fluffy heart esp. where SS/HG are concerned.

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droxy April 28 2008, 01:47:42 UTC
I was wondering why this was an order post until I read the last bit. XD

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:18:11 UTC
I did contemplate doing it as a spy for the DE.

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queenp71 April 28 2008, 01:49:12 UTC
*ponders*

As I read this, I hit this line: “It’s alright my love, it was just another nightmare. I will give you the potion again tomorrow night” and my mind refuses to let go...Did Moldiebutt really win? Is Severus giving her a potion to try to help her, but he was 'shackled' with her to save her from what's-his-face?

Are you sure this is for the Order?

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:17:21 UTC
Sorry, just re-read through and made an alteration. What I actually meant to put the first time round was Dreamless sleep. D'oh told you it was written by a dunderhead.

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queenp71 April 28 2008, 02:20:52 UTC
Not a dunderhead...just limited by words...

and I still think my interpretation could be correct. I assumed it was dreamless sleep when I read it. I just thought that he used it to get her trust by allowing her to forget the tortures of the day, so to speak...

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savine_snape April 28 2008, 02:25:29 UTC
I suppose it is still quiet ambiguous and could be taken as a DE drabble.

It's the first time for me to write something this dark, I'm usually all fluffy and warm.

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