Seek

[veriti_beauty]

Title: Seek (5,6,7))
Team: Death Eaters
Challenge: Caught
Characters: Severus/Hermione, Tom riddle
Word Count: 3 @ 100
A/N: You guys will have to comment to see what happens *twiddles thumbs innocently*

(5)
With pain searing up her right leg Hermione drew herself to her full height, glaring as she did so. She slapped him across the cheek,

Comments

[rarity]

Wow. the beautiful angst.

[veriti_beauty]

thankyou

[veriti_beauty]

for the first part, its in the next set...

precisely, body lock charm ;P

thankyou very much!

[benebu]

in #5, I don't really get what you mean by She knew he was coming. Who's the 'he' ? The baby ? I'm confused.

I like what you did in #6, quoting 2 challenges in only one sentence.

And #7 is... it chills the blood. What nightmarish scenario will Tom come up with ? Now you have to write more !

[veriti_beauty]

#5: she knew Severus was coming with back-up, but she still called his name for help, i thought it was awful when she dosent realise he's right there :'S

#6: Thankyou, I thought that would be funnny!

#7: Sorry I have had massive french tutoring all week for my upcoming late midyear's but I will post on here and FF.net hopefully tonight!

[droxy]

talking back to Tom will get her no where. Angsty cliffy.

[veriti_beauty]

I thought the know-it-all needed one last shot at gryffindor bravery, just for kicks, ;P

[veriti_beauty]

*shoo!* I plan revenge on the order :D..thanks!