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imhilien in grangersnape100

A Lesser of Two Evils?

Jul 30, 2006 21:38

Title: A Lesser of Two Evils?
Team: Death Eaters
Challenge: Seedy Second Character Challenge
Characters: Peter Pettigrew, Hermione, Snape
Word Count: 100
A/N: I don’t own the characters… you can certainly keep Pettigrew!

Peter Pettigrew’s gaze upon a captured Hermione was greedy.

“I have been a faithful servant… the Dark Lord will surely reward me ( Read more... )

seedy secondary character challenge, imhilien

Comments 15

atlantel July 30 2006, 12:25:32 UTC

Oh... The last line is evil :) I'm sure there was some UST before between the two of them, it's not possible otherwise! Well done.

imhilien July 31 2006, 09:44:53 UTC

Yes, it was evil. ;-) I wanted to imply that Hermione didn't realise *how* she would feel towards Snape until the moment of truth, so to speak...

wolf_moonshadow July 30 2006, 13:37:00 UTC

Wow, you gave me a tingle down the spine with that. guilty interest So perfect for the set up.

imhilien July 31 2006, 09:46:33 UTC

Thanks for reviewing! :-)

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imhilien July 31 2006, 09:49:44 UTC

Thanks for that! :-) I think it would be easy to feel like Hermione in that situation...

snapeophile July 30 2006, 13:51:03 UTC

Lucky Hermione . . . Take me, Severus! Take me! Oh, sorry, got carried away.

I love the last line--the "guilty interest."

imhilien July 31 2006, 09:53:40 UTC

Feel free to get carried away. ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

acadia_elle July 30 2006, 18:12:04 UTC

Hermione has 'a guilty interest…' Excellent.

imhilien July 31 2006, 09:55:15 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you approve... :-)