Please Forgive Me

[savine_snape]

Title: Please Forgive Me parts IV & V
Team: Spy for the Ladies in Black with party masks
Rating: Mature
Word count: 100 x 2
Challenge: I Dare You
Characters: Severus with mentions of Hermione, Albus and the Dark Lord.
Authors Notes: The muse is dark this morning. Not mine, just playing in JKR's sandpit. No monies are garnered from this amateur work. All

Comments

[stgulik]

"This is what he must do to give his lover the bright future she deserves./ His warrior princess, his Hermione, he will fight to the end for her. / He dares because she loves him."

Liked this one so much. You had me at "warrior princess." So evocative and powerful. He rejects the thought of carrying on for the two masters who threw him away. He carries on for his own reason: her. And she stays. And the end is a mystery. Oh.

[darkheartwalsh]

Love it, Sav! =D

[teddyradiator]

Like Jules, you had me at "Warrior Princess". Oh, when Erica is with you, the two of you create magic. I know the story, and still my heart is thumping as if I were standing in that damn shack with him.

And yet, there she is, stubborn and brave, daring him to stay with her, even though she knows that living will be more difficult than dying ever could be. You go, girl. Dare him to be tough.

[droxy]

Lovely use of the dare challenge!

Feed me angst cookies...nom nom nom.

[jenidralph]

“Live, Severus. I dare you.”

Perfection.