Comments | grangersnape100: Never Black

maggiemix in grangersnape100

Never Black

Jul 06, 2010 22:57

Title: Never Black
Team Name: spy (for the Order)
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: blanket challenge, child challenge
Characters: just Severus
Authors Notes: Long time no write :) I’ve missed gs100 *sigh*

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His aunt had sewn it and upon use, he’d charmed black the quilt of sunflowers and rainbows; wandlessly, deepest feelings tangibly ( Read more... )

maggiemix, child challenge, blanket challenge

Comments 13

shefa July 6 2010, 15:04:35 UTC

Oh, that's just beautiful. Wow. The image of the blanket sheltering him and reflecting the darkness of his mood and life is powerful. Beautifully done.

maggiemix July 7 2010, 00:46:44 UTC

thank you :) your analysis makes it seem even nicer xD

bambu345 July 6 2010, 16:41:05 UTC

How lovely. Thanks.

maggiemix July 7 2010, 00:47:06 UTC

:D thank you.

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maggiemix July 7 2010, 00:47:39 UTC

heehee. thank you. and indeed^^

madeleone July 6 2010, 17:15:12 UTC

Oh this is perfect!
That last line is just so touching.
Great job.

maggiemix July 7 2010, 00:48:21 UTC

thank you^^ wrote it back to front actually, the last line coming first so i'm glad you liked it.

droxy July 6 2010, 18:20:09 UTC

We missed you too!!! WB

maggiemix July 7 2010, 00:49:09 UTC

hahah. real life has been cruel. will be visiting for a few days before it's back to school again. :D