Not a Gentleman

[duniazade]

Title: Not a Gentleman
Team Name: Spy for the Death Eaters
Word Count: 5x100
Rating: M
Challenge: Not a Gentleman
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Disclaimer: I am making no profit. Any characters or settings recognizable from the Harry Potter series belong to J.K. Rowling. The rest is mine.

Comments

[lillithj]

Hee! Lovely. Most excellent last line.

[duniazade]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I have got your message, and the answer is an enthusiastic "Yes." I have to go to bed now, but I'll send the pertinent details tomorrow.

[lillithj]

And greedy reader that I am, I'd love to read more, like does Severus conjure up a towel? or not?

YAY! I'm so glad.

[redskyatnight76]

Last line = pure genius, obviously! And I'm delighted he took the opportunity to get a good eyeful as well. I find it a bit unlikely when people write him as the type who doesn't take advantage...

[duniazade]

Oh, he'd definitely take at least some advantage - he's a Slytherin, right? Besides, it's more fun.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[cecelle]

Loved it!

*** still snickering at the house elves multiplying with bunnies ***

Anyway, loved it, and I truly hope that the moment doesn't get interrupted by numerous Fairy Leeches biting! ;-)

[duniazade]

You're right, I hope the Fairy Leeches don't choose that moment to swarm over and get a good bite at both of them. Hmmm...

Anyway, thank you - I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[dreamy_dragon73]

This is brilliant. The imagery is beautiful and I, too, love the last line.

[duniazade]

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :D

[duniazade]

Yes, for both of them - when I think of how hard she worked to make Ron vaguely aware that she wasn't a boy...

Thank you, Scoffy - I'm very glad you enjoyed this.