Comments | grangersnape100: Not a Gentleman

duniazade in grangersnape100

Not a Gentleman

Oct 05, 2009 18:48

Title: Not a Gentleman
Team Name: Spy for the Death Eaters
Word Count: 5x100
Rating: M
Challenge: Not a Gentleman
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Disclaimer: I am making no profit. Any characters or settings recognizable from the Harry Potter series belong to J.K. Rowling. The rest is mine.

( At sunset, on the shore of the Black Lake, Professor Snape took off his boots... )

not a gentleman challenge, duniazade

Comments 46

opaljade October 5 2009, 18:05:30 UTC

This was brilliant! Such vivid imagery...
Snape and Hermione's portrayal was perfect too!

I love your writing duniazade.

xo

duniazade October 5 2009, 18:09:26 UTC

Thank you so much, Opal! I adore your writing and your art too - and if you ever feel moved to illustrate this scene... *nudge, nudge*

shiv5468 October 5 2009, 18:08:43 UTC

Gigglesnort

duniazade October 5 2009, 18:10:39 UTC

Thank you! :D

bluestocking79 October 5 2009, 18:11:43 UTC

Oh, this is completely brilliant! It's so sensual, and the descriptions are so evocative. I mean, the way you articulate the tangibility of Snape's gaze... guh. Beautiful, beautiful language.

I love it to pieces, and the last line is the icing on a particularly decadent and naughty cake. *g*

duniazade October 5 2009, 18:20:03 UTC

Decadent and naughty cake - oh, I love that. It's music to my ears! :D

Thank you very much, Bluey; I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

*iz chuffed*

droxy October 5 2009, 19:06:44 UTC

-Snorts_ at last line...=)

Hee

duniazade October 5 2009, 19:12:14 UTC

Well, it's the pure and simple truth. :)

lulabelle72 October 5 2009, 19:41:13 UTC

Loved it from the unbuttoning of the trousers leg to the last line.

Now, does she stalk past him, splashing a bit unnecessarily much? Or...???

duniazade October 5 2009, 19:55:50 UTC

Thank you, lovely Lula!

Now, does she stalk past him, splashing a bit unnecessarily much?

Hee! That would be a waste, wouldn't it?

She hasn't her wand, btw - left it on the shore with her clothes.

So maybe he says: "I agree, however, that the odds are uneven" and then...

*whacks half-bred plot bunny*

lulabelle72 October 5 2009, 19:58:19 UTC

You're bunny-obsessed, LOL!

I saw your comment up above to our darling OpalJade. By chance, did you see the art she drew for my birthday? It's... *faints*

Your fic, her art -- that would be a combination made in fanfic heaven.

duniazade October 5 2009, 20:05:02 UTC

I'm besieged by bunnies - have three of four stories hopping along at the same time and they're driving me mad.

Nooo, I didn't see that art - link, pretty please?

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