Not a Gentleman

[duniazade]

Title: Not a Gentleman
Team Name: Spy for the Death Eaters
Word Count: 5x100
Rating: M
Challenge: Not a Gentleman
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Disclaimer: I am making no profit. Any characters or settings recognizable from the Harry Potter series belong to J.K. Rowling. The rest is mine.

Comments

[melusin_79]

Love it. Brilliant last line :)

[duniazade]

Thank you so much! :)

[septentrion1970]

Bunnies and house-elves? *shudders*

Love the last line. Somehow, it reminds me of Eowyn in the Lord of the Rings, when she says, "I am no man".

[duniazade]

Yes, that is a terrible thought, isn't it? ;-)

I had a lot of trouble remembering Eowyn's line but at last it came back - it's when she slays the baddie who "cannot be killed by a man," isn't it? It's been a long time since I've read LotR.

Thank you!

[septentrion1970]

this is it.

[pythia_delphi]

So much to comment on in this!

Loved the lush imagery.

moving slowly over her skin and, like a soft painter’s brush

This, especially was so *guh* as was the idea of Severus undoing the buttons of his trouser leg. *drools*

I must admit though, that the idea of house-elves breeding with bunnies was a bit icky. ;-)

And the last line was a stroke of genuis!

[duniazade]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and so pleased that you liked the sensual aspect! Thank you very much.

I completely agree with you about house-elves and bunnies - it's a terrifying idea. Fortunately, Severus has been very firm on the subject.

[debjunk]

LOL, Great last line! LOL! Cute story.

[duniazade]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[dickgloucester]

Oh, that was just perfect! Brilliant last line!

[duniazade]

Hee! Thank you very much, Dicky - I'm so pleased you've liked it.

I have just seen you're posting a series - sorry for having butted in. *scurries off to read Dicky*