Snivellus

Mar 09, 2009 21:27

Title: Snivellus
Team Name: Spy for the Death Eaters
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: stuck on you, nicknames
Characters: Hermione/Severus
Disclaimer: I am making no profit. Any characters or settings recognizable from the Harry Potter series belong to J.K. Rowling. The rest is mine.

~*~*~*~It was dusk, and they sat under the beech tree ( Read more... )

nicknames challenge, stuck on you challenge, duniazade

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septentrion1970 March 9 2009, 20:44:45 UTC
What an eloquent silence!

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duniazade March 9 2009, 21:42:23 UTC
Thank you.

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lifeasanamazon March 9 2009, 20:49:56 UTC
I found this very moving. I don't know why, but you have me in tears.

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duniazade March 9 2009, 21:43:53 UTC
Thank you very much, though I'm sorry for the tears.

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sbrande March 9 2009, 20:54:07 UTC
Beautiful.

Love Sonia :)

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duniazade March 9 2009, 21:44:34 UTC
Thank you, Sonia!

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bluestocking79 March 9 2009, 22:58:50 UTC
~sigh~ This is so lovely. It's so eloquent in its stillness, and very intimate. The image of him feeling secure enough to rest his head in her lap, and the two of them holding hands... again, just lovely.

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duniazade March 10 2009, 00:12:34 UTC
I'm very glad you enjoyed it - thank you so much for the insightful comment!

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opaljade March 10 2009, 00:54:27 UTC
This is beautiful! I can see them so vividly in my mind. I don't know how you are able to say so much in so few words. Bravo!

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duniazade March 10 2009, 08:27:42 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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