Comments | grangersnape100: I F***ing Do, Part 21

bluestocking79 in grangersnape100

I F***ing Do, Part 21

Jun 29, 2008 09:00

Title: I F***ing Do
Team : Order of the Phoenix
Word Count: 100 x 14
Rating: Mature--bad language here. (Well, obviously.)
Challenge: Creative Cursing Challenge
Characters: Hermione/Severus, Fluffy the Parrot, two Grouchy Goblins, two Smelly Centaurs, Luna, Lavender, Ginny and the fine and upstanding witches of Hogwarts.
Disclaimer: They're not ( Read more... )

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bluestocking79 June 30 2008, 13:19:17 UTC

Thank you! I was a little nervous about writing something a bit more serious than usual, so I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

And why do I have a sense of impending doom?

~looks innocent, whistles~ What would make you think there could be anything like doom on the horizon, just because Hermione's all alone and nobody knows where she is... ;-)

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bluestocking79 June 30 2008, 13:21:39 UTC

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! (Seriously, thanks for the encouragement.)

Aberforth has no idea what he's missing out on, not allowing Fluffy to join their little group... you know, on second thought, I think he knows exactly what he's missing, and it's probably intentional. ;-)

I think Madam Pomfrey probably did a good job healing the hoof marks. At least I hope she did!

septentrion1970 June 29 2008, 14:17:03 UTC

Mopey Hermione is actually endearing. I wonder if Severus will come to the same conclusion and go back home. They'll deserve a happily ever after after all the mayhem they'd gone through just to be wedded.

bluestocking79 June 30 2008, 13:23:58 UTC

I'm so glad you found this side of Hermione endearing! She didn't mean to hurt Severus' feelings; she's just stretched to the breaking point. Now she understands what's really important to her.

Of course, Severus might have a few revelations of his own, as well. You'll have to wait and see!

They definitely deserve a romantic happily-ever-after after the mess they've endured.

dreamy_dragon73 June 29 2008, 14:31:49 UTC

Great set! Fluffy is a hoot, and the last drabble was very sweet and touching!

bluestocking79 June 30 2008, 13:25:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, including the more serious tone at the end. Hermione's had a bit of a revelation.

duniazade June 29 2008, 15:42:02 UTC

Luna is just perfect, especially in the way she swerves serenely from virginity-assuming to blunt-questioning! And of course if one can't see pogwumps, one gets trampled by unicorns -it makes perfect, if hilariously crazy, sense.

And I love Hermione's serious moment.

The cursing is stellar as always, but "Cronus' cock ring" was a true hoot this time!

I wonder if Severus' stag night is just as fwoopingly perfect as Hermione's...

bluestocking79 June 30 2008, 13:34:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm really delighted that the Luna bits work for you. I think that she has very little shame, so she probably wouldn't see a thing wrong with questioning Hermione about the specifics of Severus' equipment.

I'm especially glad you liked the serious moment. I think she needed a moment to reflect on what really matters to her, before the big day. The wedding planning has been a huge distraction to her.

"Cronus' cock ring" was my favorite from this batch, so you win the prize!

As for the stag night... well, I'm sure we'll find out shortly. ;-)