I F***ing Do!

Jun 13, 2008 17:10

Title: I F***ing Do!
Team: Burning Budgies.
Word Count: 100 x 11
Rating: M (language :D)
Characters: Hermione, Severus, The Malfoys
Author's Notes: Nothing belongs to me, unfortunately.

Many thanks to ALL the harpies who collectively helped me edit this, particularly Camillo, Buzzy and Dickie. Thanks ladies!

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a_bees_buzz June 13 2008, 10:14:41 UTC
What a wonderful manipulative Narcissa! And I love the range of her cursing, from "sodding" and "fuckwitted" to a very posh "Merlin's pearls".

I very much approve of Severus' 'punishment'; Hermione is one clever witch!

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gilded_glamour June 15 2008, 00:29:01 UTC
Thanks Buzzy! :)

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treeson June 13 2008, 10:47:22 UTC
It had taken much emotion, words of comfort and, of course, sex.

Because that is exactly how one goes about agreeing to ANYTHING.

I'm serious.

XDD I fucking love this.

<3 treeson

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gilded_glamour June 15 2008, 00:29:40 UTC
It really, really is.
There's no other way, except possibly chocolate.
:D

Thanks treeson!

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septentrion1970 June 13 2008, 10:51:39 UTC
Oh the predicament: ivory, beige, cream or almond? Choices, choices...

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gilded_glamour June 15 2008, 00:29:59 UTC
They're all so different! What to do?!

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dreamy_dragon73 June 13 2008, 11:12:47 UTC
Brilliant! I love your Narcissa :D

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gilded_glamour June 15 2008, 00:30:12 UTC
Thanks, dreamy! I'm glad you do. :D

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dickgloucester June 13 2008, 12:14:03 UTC
I think your characterisation of Narcissa is absolutely perfect, and I love the tenderness and seriousness between Severus and Hermione that you've placed just beneath the surface of all the comedy.

Such a treat to read this!

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gilded_glamour June 15 2008, 00:30:51 UTC
Thank you so much, Dicky. :) I'm really glad you think so.

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