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gradgirl_07

Fic: Off the Stage (13b/14)

Mar 27, 2011 07:56

Title: Off the Stage (13/14)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: NC-17

( Chapter 13b )

eric/van; fic: off the stage

Comments 49

slayerkitty March 27 2011, 12:59:03 UTC

I've been a bad comment leaver. :(

HEE. Also, I expect more nc-17 fic from you now, you realize that, yes? :D

gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 13:01:11 UTC

I felt confident posting, b/c of your insistence on it. That was comment enough. :-) And yes, I haven't forgotten your NC-17 rule for my stories. Thanks for everything, bb. ~Ali

slayerkitty March 27 2011, 13:03:57 UTC

Awwww, now I feel all warm and fuzzy. *hugs*

cherimola March 27 2011, 18:17:10 UTC

Glad to hear we're on the same team, Slayer. ;)

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dani_blondy March 27 2011, 13:09:06 UTC

Can't wait for the last chapter I have been reading this but not commenting. Bad Dani :D

HIHI Kitty :-)

gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 14:16:43 UTC

Thank you for commenting now. :-) ~Ali

ltklo March 27 2011, 13:53:00 UTC

Gotta run. Gotta make this quick.

One of the thing that I love most about your writing is the honesty that you allow between your characters.

“Before,” the redhead continued, peppering each statement with a kiss to Van’s warm and tantalizing skin. “Before the rest of the world finds out, I want this. I want you and me.”

The blonde’s knees started to buckle and he held tightly onto Eric, as the older man continued to kiss and caress Van. “I’m not going anywhere, and I’m scared, but I want you.”

Then you use my fav line from The Wizard of Oz and end it with humor. Great twist.

“I think I’ll miss you most of all, Scarecrow.”

Eric chuckled. His hand bounced up, his fingers twitched, and he briefly tapped the side of his head. “The brain reference. Cute. But you know, Reid always had a brain, it was a heart that he needed. Luke gave it to him… But then he gave it to Chris.”

gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 14:17:16 UTC

Thank you so much. That was my fav line from The Wizard of Oz too so I'm glad you liked the twist on it. ~Ali

joann414 March 27 2011, 15:21:03 UTC

perfect. You have done a wonderful with this story..Hate to see it end. Hope u have more.

gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 18:23:46 UTC

Thank you! I do have ideas for other stories, but work might prevent me from posting for awhile. ~Ali

smoothlikebutta March 27 2011, 15:39:08 UTC

Wonderful! I loved the vulnerability, honesty, and trust between them. I also liked the parallel with the flashback and how Van had channeled Luke's emotions on that last day.

gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 18:24:15 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate what you said about Van's feelings on the last day. ~Ali