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What Keeps You Awake [Percy/Luke, NC-17]

Mar 01, 2010 09:10

Title: What Keeps You Awake
Author: igrab
Pairing: Percy/Luke
Written For: venacavaa, to the palette 2nd Thoughts
Wordcount: 678
Rating: NC-17

( Shit, Luke, they have to be gone by now. )

fandom: percy jackson and the..., pairing: percy/luke, rating: nc-17, fanfiction

Comments 10

scribblenauts28 March 8 2010, 04:41:50 UTC

OMG. I was listening to Video Phone while reading this.., ;D

lira_chan April 25 2010, 16:57:25 UTC

D'awwww, Percy worrying is kind of adorable. And Luke, you devious thing. I approve of this. (Except my inner Percy objects, yet again, to me wanting him to be like... Emotionally tormented. Slightly less strongly when reassured that he probably gets off after.) Do like. <3

chizwiffle June 21 2010, 04:07:56 UTC

I read this one a little while back and I was so certain I commented, but I didn't see it here so I am most definitely commenting again!

Absolutely amazing! I can totally see Luke being so completely devious and wonderful in just that way. The element of almost getting caught always adds something extra to steamy scenes, and this was no exception! Percy's excuses were wonderful also, and I couldn't help but smile as he made one after the other.

The idea that Luke let Percy fall asleep without getting anything in return is also wonderfully endearing, and it seems very normal for the both of them, which makes me fall in love with Luke even more. Luke is definitely my favourite character, and I absolutely love how you wrote him in this. Spot on. Pure lovely. Thank you so much for this! Please write more soon. :)

Thank you.