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Fic: Concrete

Jun 30, 2007 23:52

Title: Concrete
Author: chelle
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC17
Vetted By: yin_again
Warnings: Bondage; Borderline non-con between the characters John and Rodney are playing.
Author's Notes: Thank you to Yin and Grrrl for their comments and criticism. In the same universe as Yin's "Their Debut" and my other GPFG stories.
Summary: Written for the ( Read more... )

cast: rodney mckay: star, challenges: #1 - men in uniform, author: mmmchelle, cast: john sheppard: star_, cast: samantha carter: director

Comments 59

wolfshark July 1 2007, 04:53:28 UTC

Poor John. I really feel for him.

mmmchelle July 6 2007, 14:44:49 UTC

Thank you. Me, too.

darkhavens July 1 2007, 05:02:32 UTC

Cop!Rodney with a Southern accent made me giggle and then Speeder!John with his limp dick made me go aaaaaaaaaw.

Along with everyone else I liked the way you handled his 'problem'. Brava!

mmmchelle July 6 2007, 14:45:09 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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mmmchelle July 6 2007, 14:45:27 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

duskyfox July 1 2007, 05:18:22 UTC

Interesting and touching.

mmmchelle July 6 2007, 14:56:55 UTC

Thank you!

feather_autant July 1 2007, 05:26:46 UTC

I love that the whole scenario just plain didn't work for John, even though Rodney was right there with him. It works that way sometimes, doesn't it?

Even better was after, all nice and comfy on the couch, just being them. :)

And the Mac touch? Perfect! *g*

mmmchelle July 6 2007, 14:58:30 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to twist things around, write something a little different with the uniform set-up. I'm so pleased it worked for you, hon.

The funny thing is that one of the things I like best about this comm is the domesticity. In a porn comm. Oh, the irony.