Comments | gottalovev: it is a beautiful saturday *muah*

gottalovev

it is a beautiful saturday muah

Aug 11, 2007 14:17

hello! I was supposed to have visitors, they canceled. =D Not before I scrubbed the house clean, though. Oh well, the promise of visitors is a great cleaning motivator! But I didn't work on the Bond fic yet, though. *sigh* will answer comments and start on that. Not reading anything Luau related, but I'll get back to it. eventually!

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fic, lost fic: jack, lost

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gottalovev August 11 2007, 19:04:04 UTC

=D

yep, I did manage the hand-holding at least!

Oh, darling, I am SO happy you like this! it was interesting to go into wee!jack's head, and I do love Christian even if he's often a jerk. I do think little Jack would be shy around other kids, glad you thought it worked!

the Queen is happy! huzzah! *dances*

cmonkatiekatie August 11 2007, 19:29:20 UTC

Awww, that is just warm your heart wonderful. And it still maintains this bitter sweet quality there at the end. Beautiful.

gottalovev August 12 2007, 17:59:12 UTC

oh, thank you so much. I am happy it worked for you! I was trying to go for bittersweet, I am so happy it came through! thank you! *smooch*

slybrunette August 11 2007, 21:12:19 UTC

Aww. Little Jack is so cute! Lovely job!

gottalovev August 12 2007, 18:00:00 UTC

thank you! I do think little Jack is adorable :) happy you liked it too!

snookscribbles August 11 2007, 23:10:39 UTC

So adorable even as it beautifully foreshadows so much of the future conflict between Jack and Christian. I love how you show Jack's anxiety - the constant expectation that his dad's going to test him and he's not going to measure up. Poignant and painful and I just want to wrap wee!Jack up and take him home.

gottalovev August 12 2007, 18:02:33 UTC

oh wow, what a great feedback! thank you so much! I tried to put in that pressure the way a kid would feel it, glad it worked for you. and that you want to take wee!jack home just warms me inside with the feeling I did my job okay. thank you! *hug*

tinkerbell99 August 13 2007, 13:47:17 UTC

Company is, sometimes, my only motivation to do the nitty gritty cleaning!

Seriously? My heart just breaks for Wee!Jack. There are a lot of little things I liked in this. Poor little Jack, wanting to play hide and seek with the other kids, then having to go about it just to find his parents. And when he finds his dad (drinking) and decideds he'll be just like him...

*cries*

This is great :-)

gottalovev August 13 2007, 14:37:21 UTC

oh so true... there is no better motivator to do the job! then I say "I should do more each day, not wait until it piles up" and.... yep. I wait until it piles up ;)

I love it when what I was going for shines through. thank you so much for reading and your amazing feedback, it means a lot! *smooch*