Ashes And Wine (Twelve)

[gotstoked]

Title: Ashes And Wine (Twelve)
Author: Nat
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,107
Pairing: Gil/Nick, +Lady Heather 
Characters: Gil Grissom, Nick Stokes, (Lady) Heather Kessler and occasional cameos by other cast members.
Warnings: Adults only, please.  Character death. 
Spoilers: N/A
Disclaimer: You know the "I don't own these two" drill, so I won't bore you

Comments

[angus_honey]

OMG!!!

Although I must say I had an inkling that you were about to kill her off! However, it was v.sensitively told from Gil's POV. I'm glad that he promised Heather that he would take care of Nick...that was a good dying breath from Heather and then saying Zoe...v.g and v.emotive!

[gotstoked]

So I think maybe I need to make Nick a vampire or do something completely ridiculous just so you don't see it coming! LOL.

You'll miss her...you know you will!

[angus_honey]

Vampire? That's a new one...not! Won't miss her!

[ilovemycsi]

Wow! I was afraid this was going to happen as soon as I found out Heather was sick. Still, it was tear inducing.

Now I fear what's going to happen after that last line.

I started reading this one early this afternoon and I wanted to stop reading and comment on several chapters, but I didn't want to stop reaading!! This one had me hooked from the first word. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

[gotstoked]

Wow.

Thank you so much!

I am so glad you are as addicted to this one as I am. Although...it's kinda hard to write, to be honest. Sad!

But I am really, really glad you are following along. So closely! Hopefully uou will continue to approve! ;)

[stokesgirl]

Wow, I knew it. After the last chapter I had a feeling Heather was going to die. How sad that her son will never know his mother and she never saw her son? So sad. :(

Still need to review the other chapters, but I just could not comment on this one.

I'm glad Grissom told Catherine everything. I think Nick and Gil are really going to need her now. And, well, Catherine really needs to smack Grissom upside his head...a number of times.

I thought maybe the three would live happily ever after. *sighs*

Wow such an intense chapter...I need to go breathe now.

Excellent writing and I'm so glad you didn't stop writing this. I was so sad that I wasn't going to see what happened. :(

[gotstoked]

Ha, I am glad you are glad!

Yeah it took a lot out of me writing it, too! I am glad we all suffered through it!

Maybe the *three* of them will live happily ever after? ;)

[maxieroc]

OMG

I too had a feeling Heather was not going to make it, very well told through Gil, I felt all their pain,

Its good that Gil told Catherine, at least she will be able to help out,

Very emotional, from Heather asking Gil to take care of Nick, to her saying hello to her daughter.

wonderfully written

can't wait to see what happens next

[gotstoked]

Thanks, almost birthday girl!!! ;)

Yeah, I figured without Heather around they needed someone to kick them in the asses every so often. And of course...Cath is ALWAYS good at that!

;)

Hope you continue to enjoy!

[cgrgrl]

Oh no!! Lady Heather died! Gil and Nicky are going to have to get it together for the baby now.

[gotstoked]

We can only hope! ;)

Thanks for the comment!