[Fic] Torn Asunder [Sephiroth/Genesis]

[gothicdragon752]

Title: Torn Asunder
Pairing: Sephiroth/Genesis, Angeal/Genesis, Angeal/Zack.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Hurt/Comfort.
Wordcount: 4,769
Warnings: Emotional maelstrom!
Synopsis: We do things we don’t mean, but that doesn’t make it any easier on the ones we injure.
AN: Totally random idea whilst cleaning my fishtank.

Comments

[fidomom]

The change you made really did make a huge difference.

Also, in your honor, when they were holding hands, I stopped reading for a few seconds, for the fluffy, lol.

Cuddles are always so sigh worthy. ^_^
Seph really stepped up for Genesis; impressive! And Genesis' inner thought processes about love and what it means in the context of "in love" seemed very in character to me.

I of course being that kind of fangurl SQUEEED over Angeal's declaration of "I'm in love with (Zack) him!" Still flailing! ♥ :D Thanks for that moment! \o/

~FM :)

[gothicdragon752]

The change = adding "with"? XDD Thanks so much for pointing that out! And thanks again for helping me! Means to much! Especially since you no like the CANON that is S/G!

Somehow, I can now see Gen dragging Angeal and Zack out on a double date, which would be highly amusing. Totally might write that. How do you like you A/Z? Soppy puppy love?

[fidomom]

Haha! No, the entire phrase not just the one missed word, lol. Always glad to help, especially considering "how much writing and punctuation rules you tried to learn me"! ^_-

Aish! So combative, lol! :P Canon shmanon! Did I even say any complaint? >.<

If Angeal and Zack are together, in love, but otherwise basically in character :D - then I like it. \o/ ♥

~FM :)

[gothicdragon752]

You didn't complain... you didn't even mention that-which-shall-not-be-spoken-of-on-my-journal!

Do you think I could tide you over to S/G with fluff, love and awkward romance?

[madisuzy]

Beautifully done. I've gotten bored reading Genesis and Sephiroth as a pairing lately, but this was a breath of fresh air and I really enjoyed it. You portrayed Genesis' vulnerability perfectly, keeping him in character the whole time. I also loved your Sephiroth, how he gave support in a realistic and very in character way for him, yet it was still very touching. My heart clenched and felt Genesis' pain and Sephiroth's worry. Thank you so much for writing this lovely story.

[gothicdragon752]

And Thank you for reading!

[honzeldafitz]

This is really wonderful. ^__^

[gothicdragon752]

Thank you~!

[amarissia]

Lovely, it really made me feel for Genesis, which is often hard with Choir!Genesis shrieking at me. I'm so glad Sephiroth went after him.

[gothicdragon752]

...and what does Choir!GenGen think of it?!

[amarissia]

Gen?

Genesis: "I quite liked it. I think you could have referenced my excellent ass, though." *grin*