Comments | goth_clark: Fiction - 12 - Cloak of Darkness

goth_clark

Fiction - 12 - Cloak of Darkness - Harry Potter

Feb 21, 2007 10:24

Title: Cloak of Darkness
Fandom: Harry Potter
Sequel/Series: Battlefields
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Category: Dark Fiction
Notes: Thanks to marcasita and off_that_bridge for beta help. 2,400 words. All remaining blunders are mine. Previous parts are Here or HereWarnings: Takes place after HBP ( Read more... )

harry potter, battlefields, fiction07, draco

Comments 13

phoenix_run February 22 2007, 03:11:13 UTC

Sorry, I'm not much into Harry Potter, but since I am into Clex I could easily see Clark as the aggresor Harry and Draco as Lex. Of course the dufus Weasly could have been played by Pete, Chloe, Jon or Lana.

It was a nice hot story.

goth_clark February 22 2007, 13:24:15 UTC

You are so sweet to read this even though you aren't into the fandom. Thank you.

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goth_clark February 22 2007, 13:25:29 UTC

I meant for each part to be shorter than this part, but it sort of ran away on me. Thus where it ends.

Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. I really appreciate this more than you know.

oboros February 22 2007, 18:32:40 UTC

hello. I don't have time to read anymore during the week. When I saw you post this I should have let you know I was looking forward to catching up in this universe and commenting on Saturday! I'm very sorry I did not. When a new part of a WIP is posted I like to re-read the last two chapters before the new bit to be caught up in the universe. I went ahead and read this chapter and will still re-read everything on the weekend.

I have to say Holy Shit - Harry seems very very scary. Great tension in the first part - the chocolate scene had me on edge! I liked the 'thank you' kiss alot. And aftersards - "Say you adore me" - totally sent chills down my spine. Poor Draco. I do look forward to more.

goth_clark February 23 2007, 01:46:26 UTC

Thanks you! I really appreciate that you took time to leave such a lovely comment. I think I got chills when I wrote that "Say you adore me".

I've noticed you haven't been around lately. I hope things are okay. Miss you.

allzugern February 22 2007, 19:38:56 UTC

You know, I was going to say the story felt very disjointed and I couldn't get a feel for the situation and characters. Heh, I didn't realise it was a wip and obviously I hadn't read the earlier parts *head desk*

Like I said, I don't read much H/D, but I love a dominant and somewhat edgy Harry when I do, and that is nice to read here :-)

goth_clark February 23 2007, 02:27:52 UTC

It was meant to be finished last year, but then one thing led to another and I'm still trying to find the time to finish this thing.

Thanks for reading and giving some feedback. I really appreciate this.

meddie_flow February 23 2007, 08:56:21 UTC

Hello ( ... )

goth_clark February 23 2007, 14:43:18 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. You have idea how good it made me feel to read this.

I don't plan to leave the story hanging, so no need to worry about that. I hate leaving a WIP unfinished. I'm not sure when I can find the time to finish it, but I Promise I will.

Thank you for letting me know that you like the story.