[SMUT Filter] SasuSaku "Erebus"

[goldberry]

Well, here I am again, posting another lemon for The Church of Lemons. ♥ It's strange but I realized the other day that the only time I write SasuSaku is for The Church, which is rather odd when you think about it. In any case, let me tell that I'm extremely nervous about this particular fic. Mostly because it's set post time skip but it's AU,

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[magicnoire]

Haven't read it yet, but just wanted to let you know your cut's all wonky.

[goldberry]

Yeah, never use Rich Text Editor, it apparently doesn't like lj-cuts. -_-;;

[goldberry]

Zee~! ♥ ♥ ♥ Coming from you, this means a lot, since I always thought your lemons were some of the best I'd ever had the pleasure of reading. :D

And if I was nervous about this one, I'll be twice as nervous about the Suzaku/Euphie one. I don't think I've ever written a lemon for two people who are so polite. XDXD

[sahara_storm]

Hubba hubba. ♥

:D

Honestly dear, you shouldn't worry about your handling of SasuSaku; you have it down like a pro. All the subtle nuances, like Sakura's utter devotion and Sasuke's almost brutal personality: they were perfect. And of course, you took into account the time that passed, and the changes (hee~) that would've taken place personality-wise.

"Just because I love you, doesn't mean I forgive you. And just because I don't forgive you, doesn't mean I'm giving up."

*faintfaintSWOON*

And don't think I didn't spot those little hints of NejiTen, you sneaky thing, you. :P

Awesomeness personified as usual, my love. ♥

[goldberry]

HAHAHAHAHA, I knew I had to include Neji, and then Tenten just sort of wormed herself into the fic, but I tried to make it sort of general so I wouldn't be accused of detracting from the SasuSaku. Looks like it worked! ♥

I definitely glad I didn't butcher it too badly. For me, writing them is comparable to spinal surgery so it's nice to know all the subtle things came though.

Thanks, dear! I really appreciate the review!

[dark_moon_angel]

you're such a good writer Gee =]

[goldberry]

Sankyuu, darling~! ♥ The support is muchly appreciated.

[numena]

Possibly you have just broken my heart - but in that really good way, you know?

Only you would write a lemon that's heartbreaking and beautiful and yet full of hope. And hot. Really hot. (:

[goldberry]

It's the JAIL SEX, I swear. Anything is hot if it's behind bars and includes Sasuke. XDXD

Thanks so much for reviewing. I was uber nervous about this so it makes me feel that I might have done something right. ♥ ♥ ♥