Happy Holidays, Andremeese!

[vulgarweed]

Title: J is for Jealousy, That Green-Eyed Monster
Author: lillypuff
Characters From: Good Omens
Pairing(s): Aziraphale/Crowley
Rating: PG-13
Written For: andremeese @ go_exchange
Warnings: m/m, mild language, vicious house plants
Summary: In which Aziraphale helps a mortal, Crowley is jealous, and a fern tries to start a revolution.
Disclaimer: The angel and the demon, and the

Comments

[andremeese]

Oh, this is GRAND! You have five excellent footnotes, so I have five points to make:

1) Your Aziraphale is utterly perfect. He's all sorts of happy and joyous and everything that Christmas should be, and the bit about the biscuits? Yes, loving that, yes. <3

2) Crowley's houseplants have the most appropriate personalities! I really enjoyed the line about the African violets.

3) DEATH! Lovely cameo there!

4) “I did no such thing,” Aziraphale insisted, despite the blush that crept onto his cheeks. After a moment, the angel sighed. “All right, fine. You caught me. But I’m an angel, Crowley. I’m supposed to inspire.”

It may be a little unfair that Aziraphale makes this list twice, but this really did make me smile. :)

5) The ending! That's pretty much the best kiss ever written, IMHO. It's such a sensory experience as you've described it, and it's so vivid and lovely and comfortable-- it fits just right!

and also,
5.1) You do know that you've set an excellent tone for this new year, right, Secret Author? Thank you SO MUCH!

[secret_kracken]

YAY! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Before this I'd only written a couple GO drabbles. This is my first full length Go fic, and I admit, I was fretting a bit.

And I really do enjoy writing about kisses, so I'm glad that part was good for you XD (And what's a Christmas fic without Death in a Santa Hat? ^^)

Thank you so much for the wonderful prompts (really, jealous!Crowley and beaming!Aziraphale are so much fun to write!) and, of course, the lovely comments! I had a lot of fun writing this fic for you, and I'm thrilled you liked it so much! =)

[sirius_luva]

Did you ever read Pratchett's Hogfather? I thought you were referencing that. Imagine Death in a red hat and robe, with a cushion stuffed up his front, going HO HO HO.

This was wonderful! I enjoyed it, though admittedly I was vaguely jealous of David as well, on Crowley's behalf.

[lillypuff]

YES! I love Hogfather (hell, anything Discworld is awesome!). 'Twas my nod to Death, in all the worlds he inhabits ;)

Hee, thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

[waxbean]

this is fabulous -- i love your witty pithy writing.

your characterizations are spot on, too.

Nice!

[secret_kracken]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!

[secret_kracken]

Hee! Yes, he really is. I'm sure he has a lot coming to him now that Crowley has final gotten a clue ;)

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

[amaresu]

That was cute. I love the Foxtail fern.

[secret_kracken]

Thanks! I always thought Crowley needed a bit of a challenging house plant lol.

[meredydd]

That rocked my socks! I loved the Death-cameo lol.

[secret_kracken]

*grins* Thank you so much!