Comments | gnashsang: angst warning X3

gnashsang

angst warning X3

Mar 23, 2009 21:15

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bentgyro March 24 2009, 18:28:46 UTC

You sure know how to hit a person over the head! Surprise ending alright.
Thanks!
HT

gnashsang March 24 2009, 22:07:22 UTC

gosh, i hope it wasn't toooo harsh.. maybe the warning should have been in red.. :x :/ :)

equally_dour March 25 2009, 12:35:50 UTC

You're posting so many things again - how am I suppose to catch up? :P

The ending surprised the hell out of me. OUCH. :(

gnashsang March 27 2009, 02:00:47 UTC

ohh, i'm sorry. ouch i know. well, it said angus angst times 3! ;)

:/ i don't do warnings very well. but most people know what to expect, i think. hehe. i'm glad it surprised you, it surprised me too. i didn't think i'd put it in there at all. i mean. i never set out to have it end that way. it just made sense, somehow. then i added the red ink and left it alone. i really was thinking of heath at that point, so, yeah... not that he killed himself, but he did die naked and all... in a bed with nobody around. :/ i'm still thinking.. oh, never mind. his spirit is still alive.

omg, somebody's chewin on his nut... my hamster just woke up. :D

mariska_to March 26 2009, 23:04:50 UTC

this is such an original take and a great idea! and beautifully written, as always. thank you! :) xoxoxox

pink heart code: <3 gnashsang March 27 2009, 02:06:42 UTC

thank you! you know how i always second guess my writing, so this means a lot! for me, unique is easy, but the written part is still baffling... lay, lie, laid, and all that, you know. so big thanks, and XOXOXOXO

lara_pinta March 28 2009, 23:59:34 UTC

What a punch you deliver here - how cruel life can be. What a clever twist to the sender and recipient of the 'deceased' postcard.

Loved this and thanks.
Lorna

gnashsang April 14 2009, 00:31:52 UTC

glad you enjoyed the twist at the end. it snuck up on me too, when writing. :)

freetraveller15 April 13 2009, 22:29:35 UTC

Hello, nice to see you posting more regularly lately.
I loved this piece, angst and all.
Thank you so much for sharing,
Paola

gnashsang April 14 2009, 00:29:42 UTC

thanks paola, for reading and saying hello... i'm glad it wasn't too angst-y! :) i wasn't sure how to end it, but i didn't want to go on, so it seemed like a good way to wrap up the story.