Take 2

Apr 20, 2005 00:09

Got a decent outline set up for the 25 page attempt now, so should be getting started on that soon. I was asked to attempt the "write your part of the story next" idea again. So here we go, I'm going to leave it very open ended ( Read more... )

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budka April 20 2005, 14:12:35 UTC
Johnathan slowly edged his head up. Just as his head reached the proper level, he was blinded by a ray of sunlight that none of his shorter sidewalk-mates seemed to notice. He pulled his huge sunglasses over his eyes, drawing a second taken-aback glance from a passing pretty girl. Johnathan sighed, and got moving.

He wondered briefly if Vic knew it was his half-birthday. Why else would Vic insist on meeting today? Despite Johnathan's best efforts to delay their discussion (indefinitely) until tomorrow, Vic was adamant. A cloud passed by overhead. Johnathan left his goofy glasses on anyway. With his luck, he would simply be blinded again the moment he took them off.

His shin struck ...

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daniel_trang April 20 2005, 14:58:03 UTC
His shin struck a metal sign pole. "God damn it!" Johnathan yelled to himself. Ever since he was young, Johnathan always had a tendency to bump into large stationary objects. "Are you ok?" asked a concerned young female voice behind him. "Oh, hi Vic I'm fine..." replied Johnathan in apparent agony. Victoria, as known as Vic, was one of Johnathan's classmates. They both attended Barton's School of Fine Arts. Vic was a...

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thesoundofduck May 6 2005, 17:47:53 UTC
They both attended Barton's School of Fine Arts. Vic was a member of The Secret Society of Radio-Wave Travellers, but Johnathan didn't know that yet. To him, Vic was just his more-than-average pretty friend who liked roller blading and beating him at video games just as much as she liked painting masterpieces and picking out new rings for her eyebrow piercing. Little did he know that...

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