Weep for Yourself

Jul 04, 2010 02:56

Title: weep for yourself
Author: glass_radical
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Through "Confirmed Dead." Character Death
Summary: A moment later, he acts like nothing happened. For lost_in_108 's prompt "linger"

He pretends that it takes longer than it does, as he hovers over her stiff body. Her eyes are open, staring at nothing. They're watching him, their words are white ( Read more... )

character: naomi dorrit, fan fiction, character: miles straume, lost_in_108, pairing: miles/naomi

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glass_radical July 4 2010, 18:38:24 UTC
LOL THAT GIF.

Yes it is Miles/Naomi so no fear there. And thank you so much bb. :)

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nini_darko July 4 2010, 12:38:22 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ ....obviously I love it

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glass_radical July 4 2010, 18:39:00 UTC
I'm glad. :D <3<3

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ilaydanur July 4 2010, 15:20:19 UTC
Very nice!

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glass_radical July 4 2010, 18:39:53 UTC
thank you. :)

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valhalla37 July 5 2010, 01:52:26 UTC
Wow, this is so fantastic!

I love Miles/Naomi to begin with, and this is just so perfectly Miles, and so bittersweet. I especially loved this line -- It’s nothing. Just meat. He exhales sharply, his brain knotting at the memory of a knife striking muscle in the smooth flat of her back.

Wonderful!

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glass_radical July 5 2010, 05:10:23 UTC
Thank you so much, you're very kind. :)

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sirenprincess July 6 2010, 03:26:12 UTC
Awww, so sad. But good too. Thank you for sharing.

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glass_radical July 7 2010, 02:08:47 UTC
thanks for reading! :)

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