aaawww, the cuties had their first sex together :) I would kick Kris in the ass if he told Adam he had regrets of it ! But Kris would never do that... he's too sweet :)
Okay, finally I reached chapter 6. It took a while, but here I am. Now then, to give my opinion about this chapter: OMFG, <33333333 *cough* but u were probably expected more than that, so here's the complete translated, English version of the previous statement:
You wrote this entire scenario wonderfully, and I think that it was right for Kris to get a bigger push to truly realize his feelings. I feel sad that Adam's on a crutch and that Kris is getting bullied, but it does make the situation more realistic. Also, yay for Adam's family being understanding; though it gets me worried, because what if Kris' family has a problem with this kinda thing??? Neyways, overall, it was interesting and I hope to see an update!
XD Longest comment from me ever since I joined LJ, just FYI
I feel special XD lolglambertrockJune 3 2010, 21:48:44 UTC
:D lol that basically said a lot LOL
Thanks so much :D <3333 I know it sucks about Adam on crutches and Kris being bullied, but that's all part of the drama! :D I guess ur gonna have to see how the Allen family reacts for urself later ;)
I'm gonna' work on 7 tonight, so be happy :D lol Thanks for the LONG comment :D
just one question.. I was visualizing this and well Kris never put clothes on lol so either Adam dressed him or he ran out of that room in his birthday suit lol anyway so glad that worked out! Neil is such a goof:) I love Highschool Kradam!!
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Idiot me :P hahahahahahahahahahaha! I am dying in laughter lol Thanks for pointing that out lol
LOL.... these two probably my most favorite line so far:
"Adam, please speak baby! I mean, it's not like the world's gonna' end! It's not like Kris could get pregnant!" (LOL)
"Oh poor Kris. Ugh, after last night I've lost all respect for him. Adam, Adam, oh Adam, more more baby!" -okay, as much as funny this line, I would be embarrassed if someone else hear me moaning like that. like , oh SHIT! am doomed stuff ... :)
LOL that's my fave part! Neil is the annoying little bro here, so....I made him annoying! lol! And this, my friend, is just classic! I would have hit him in the face or something :P Remember that line, cause later on, it get's used in a bit of a story line 0_o
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I would kick Kris in the ass if he told Adam he had regrets of it ! But Kris would never do that... he's too sweet :)
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LOL Glad Kris is safe from you :P
Yeah, Kristopher is too sweet :D
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I already slapped him twice, but I think kicking is a bit too harsh... :p
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"Oh poor Kris. Ugh, after last night I've lost all respect for him. Adam, Adam, oh Adam, more more baby!"
Oh poor Neil. lmaooooo
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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD Glad u liked it!
And yes, poor Neil. I would have like, slept outside if I was him lol jk jk
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Now then, to give my opinion about this chapter:
OMFG, <33333333
*cough* but u were probably expected more than that, so here's the complete translated, English version of the previous statement:
You wrote this entire scenario wonderfully, and I think that it was right for Kris to get a bigger push to truly realize his feelings. I feel sad that Adam's on a crutch and that Kris is getting bullied, but it does make the situation more realistic. Also, yay for Adam's family being understanding; though it gets me worried, because what if Kris' family has a problem with this kinda thing??? Neyways, overall, it was interesting and I hope to see an update!
XD Longest comment from me ever since I joined LJ, just FYI
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Thanks so much :D <3333
I know it sucks about Adam on crutches and Kris being bullied, but that's all part of the drama! :D
I guess ur gonna have to see how the Allen family reacts for urself later ;)
I'm gonna' work on 7 tonight, so be happy :D lol
Thanks for the LONG comment :D
Just thanks :D
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Bwahahaha I made u obsessed with this lol
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Idiot me :P hahahahahahahahahahaha! I am dying in laughter lol
Thanks for pointing that out lol
I know, Neil's so goofy :D
:D Glad u love it!
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"Adam, please speak baby! I mean, it's not like the world's gonna' end! It's not like Kris could get pregnant!"
(LOL)
"Oh poor Kris. Ugh, after last night I've lost all respect for him. Adam, Adam, oh Adam, more more baby!"
-okay, as much as funny this line, I would be embarrassed if someone else hear me moaning like that. like , oh SHIT! am doomed stuff ... :)
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LOL got to love Leila :P
LOL that's my fave part! Neil is the annoying little bro here, so....I made him annoying! lol! And this, my friend, is just classic! I would have hit him in the face or something :P Remember that line, cause later on, it get's used in a bit of a story line 0_o
Thanks!
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