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3 Vanilla Candles

Mar 21, 2011 01:57

Title: 3 Vanilla Candles
Author: giveitupjessica
Pairing: MinKey/OnKey
Rating: PG-15
Wordcount: 3, 382
Prompt: both
Disclaimer: character death, hint of smut
Summary: I stand up from my spot across from him. I know he can’t see me and I really shouldn’t be here. But I needed to see him one last time before I left for good. I kiss the top of his head knowing that ( Read more... )

shawol_haven, minkey, !oneshot, onkey, rating: pg-15

Comments 56

ext_359722 March 21 2011, 10:26:06 UTC

Ahh Minho didn't get the chance to see Kibum before he dies!
poor Minho... didn't get to know what Key wanted to tell him. :(

giveitupjessica March 26 2011, 18:18:15 UTC

thanks for reading! if you could please go and vote for it over at shawol_haven that would mean a lot to me. THANKS AGAIN!

a_life_defiant March 21 2011, 11:31:04 UTC

Spot ^^

♥

a_life_defiant March 22 2011, 04:34:48 UTC

“A kiss in the north,” he kisses the taller’s forhead.

“A kiss in the south,” his chin.

“A kiss in the east,” his right cheek.

“A kiss in the west,” his left cheek.

“Makes a kiss around the world so you can do your best,” a light kiss is placed on the other’s lips

AWWWW!!!! XD

“I mean it Key. You either leave with me right now or don’t see me ever again.”

“I-I can’t,” he says just barely above a whisper, head bowing down.

“Fine. It’s your choice. Good-bye Kim Kibum,”

T______T

“Ganbatte ne Kibum!” I say in his ear and proceed with our usual ritual, kissing him all over his face before I take a step away from him, “Please don’t cry for me anymore. We’ll be together one day and maybe then you can tell me what you wanted to tell me a year ago. But until then, live and love for me.”

*sniffles* I need tissues......

♥

giveitupjessica March 26 2011, 18:19:10 UTC

i'm glad you enjoyed reading it alyssa. mind helping me out and voting for it at shawol_haven? i'll love you forever if you do! keke.

a_life_defiant March 27 2011, 02:54:36 UTC

^^ done

*squish*

♥

chaerin_ah March 21 2011, 14:08:33 UTC

nooo.. why does minho have to die?
i'm curious to what key is going to say to minho..

giveitupjessica March 26 2011, 18:23:44 UTC

i tried to hint at what key was going to say. especially at the end when he was at minho's grave with onew. for example this line: The tears are falling much like they did the night he lost the person he loved more than life itself in the end he was going to choose minho.

glad you liked it though! if you could please go and vote for it at shawol_haven it would be greatly appreciated. THANKS!

fantasydesire March 21 2011, 14:31:16 UTC

HUAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! Why is everyone out to get me and make me cry? this is like the second time within half an hour. TT_TT

first it was kirie.. now you jess..

*sobs*

ps: its sad and touching and I'm not even kidding you - my tears just fell.. again.

giveitupjessica March 21 2011, 15:17:03 UTC

i sorry bb. i should warned that it was angst. :P well i did warn the character death. mianhe! i'll try to update right here soon so you can be happy :)

fantasydesire March 22 2011, 13:40:05 UTC

yeay!!! more updates... rofl! I know.. but it just happened and I cant stop it.. sorry for being emotional.. ^^

giveitupjessica March 26 2011, 18:25:25 UTC

sorry i didn't get to the update for right here as soon as i would have liked. i'm working on it right now and it'll be a long chapter just to make up for making you wait. kekeke.

oh and please go and vote for this fic at shawol_haven i'd be extremely thankful!

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rockerloser March 21 2011, 15:52:37 UTC

It made me cry:(

giveitupjessica March 26 2011, 18:26:37 UTC

as bad as this may sound, i'm always happy when i see that my writing has moved people to tears. i never think it's good enough to stir up those kinds of emotions in people. so thanks for reading and commenting! please go and vote for this at shawol_haven please! thank you!