Nice! A really nice make-it-better story with all the fills I could wish for (including a few logical observations that were missing from the episode *g*) You have some very nice voices there, too.
And the vid is a brilliant bit of editing. I really liked Will; I want this to be canon.
Excellent editing on the video and I loved the story. It was tightly written and believable and it Will was delightful and wonderfully supportive throughout. I love that it's him that comes up with the solution. Arthur and Morgana knowing about Merlin would have helped both of them immensely. It makes for a much happier outcome for everyone.
This exchange made me laugh out loud: "I'll tell my mum and Arthur that I'm sleeping with you."
"Yes," Will smirks. "And be sure to phrase it exactly like that." He wants to see the look on Arthur's face. "Only to Arthur! Please don't say it like that to your mother." Merlin not having any idea what Will is going on about is hysterical.
It's a brilliant vid. And a lovely story to expand on it. I love this line - Nobody mentions to Uther how Arthur did and Merlin didn't commit any crimes in Essetir. which is a perfect summation of the problem and the solution. Wonderful.
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You have some very nice voices there, too.
And the vid is a brilliant bit of editing.
I really liked Will; I want this to be canon.
Thanks for sharing.
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This exchange made me laugh out loud: "I'll tell my mum and Arthur that I'm sleeping with you."
"Yes," Will smirks. "And be sure to phrase it exactly like that." He wants to see the look on Arthur's face. "Only to Arthur! Please don't say it like that to your mother." Merlin not having any idea what Will is going on about is hysterical.
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I love this line - Nobody mentions to Uther how Arthur did and Merlin didn't commit any crimes in Essetir. which is a perfect summation of the problem and the solution. Wonderful.
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You did wonderfully. ♥
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