Fic: Angel's (Not So Much) Inner Monologue

[girlpire]

Title: Angel's (Not So Much) Inner Monologue
Author: girlpire
Rating: R/FRM
Pairing: Angel/Spike
Warnings: Implied m/m sex, extreme silliness, general OOC-ness of Angel due to the premise of the plot. If you can call it a plot.
Disclaimer: This story is based on the "Angel" series, with which I am not affiliated in any way. Joss Whedon is my master

Comments

[trepkos]

God that was hilarious!

[girlpire]

thanks, i'm glad you think so!

[trepkos]

It had me sniggering first thing in the morning, almost the whole time I was reading it. "Tits!"

[trepkos]

And I know the funny is very funny, but I also loved the way you handled Spike's reaction - his confusion and being upset at being seen as just an object. Very sensitively written from both Angel and Spike's POV, even with the great comedy.

[sueworld2003]

OMG that was superb1 Brilliant character voices, and a wonderful idea full of comedy gold.

Excellent stuff! *g*

[girlpire]

thank you so much! and i appreciate the rec. :)

[glassdarklyuk]

This was wonderful. When you posted that little fragment of it a while back I so hoped you'd continue it.

An absolute gem - very funny and with terrific character voices.

[girlpire]

thanks! the reason i chose to continue this story (out of all of my unfinished ones) is because so many people had such a positive reaction to it when i posted that little snippet.

[henriettaholden]

That was one of the funniest pwpwps I've ever read :D
Thanks for making procrastination a chucklefest

[girlpire]

thanks! i'm glad i could entertain. :)

[girlpire]

i can tell! thank you. :)

why Spike smelled like a hydra and salad

heh. heh heh. i giggled when i wrote angel noticing that, and then asking why spike smelled like salad - because the hydra thing? no big deal. but salad? that's... weird. :D