Call to Arms (The Gunpowder Remix) PG 13, Sam/Dean

Sep 07, 2008 23:03

 Notes:   As soon as Read more... )

remix, my fic

Leave a comment

Comments 36

dreamsofoctober September 16 2008, 11:20:38 UTC
That was adorable and sweet and I love the guns. Seriously, they're all SO cute. I loved Marlene. She was. YAY. You win at life. Seriously. Amazing.

Reply

girlguidejones September 16 2008, 20:48:50 UTC
*blushes*

Thank you so much for your comments. They made my day!

Reply


brigid_tanner October 4 2008, 18:56:03 UTC
LOL!! That's really unique. I think this was my favorite part:
“Says the revolver that was supposed to keep Hell locked up for all eternity. And I agree with Sig on one thing, at least...they’re usin’ too damn much oil. Anything needin’ that much lubrication is beyond functionality.” Except maybe how much Marlene enjoys watching the boys ;)

Reply

girlguidejones November 29 2008, 01:29:45 UTC
For some reason, I never got this comment...*shakes LJ, hoping more FB drops out*

Unique was definitely the goal...thanks so much for leaving a kind word! :)

Reply


halfshellvenus October 17 2008, 07:19:31 UTC
Because I'm SO kind, I'm posting my comments both here AND at the comm. ;)

Finally getting around to reading this. It's so bizarrely wonderful, the guns arguing among themselves while the 'offscreen' Sam/Dean continues and is perfectly clear. Plus, we get hints of the boys' past and of how things went after the hell hounds came for Dean.

“Two siblings is wrong. Also, look at them now... too much oil.”
That part cracked me up the most-- it's such a gun POV to think too much oil is being used, no matter how. :D

“You sure do talk a lot about how long you’ve been around, Colt. But you never mention how you were in a little ole’ lock box for most of it. Don’t know how you managed t’ pick up so much wisdom about humans from all that time in the dark.”
Heh! A well-deserved rebuke. ;)

“Sam does always become...intrigued...when Dean’s cleaning us.”Why yes-- I have a little pornlet based solely around that concept ( ... )

Reply

girlguidejones November 29 2008, 01:34:19 UTC
I never got this comment! Only saw it today because I got a new one below, so please forgive the non-reply.

I appreciate seeing all the little nuances you picked up (even though I've been Kripke'd in the meantime...*L*)- it's nice to know that they came through!

Thanks!

:)

Reply

halfshellvenus November 29 2008, 04:04:04 UTC
I'm glad you finally saw it! This has not been a great period for LJ and comment notification, needless to say. :(

appreciate seeing all the little nuances you picked up (even though I've been Kripke'd in the meantime...*L*)
Frustrating, isn't it? The Kripke'ing is becoming more frequent as we get farther into the show.

Nonetheless, it doesn't begin to diminish the wonderful approach to remixing this story. :)

Reply


annkiri November 28 2008, 17:31:07 UTC
Oh honey! This is wonderful. A fresh and insightful and look at the boys and their lives. Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to it.

Reply

girlguidejones November 29 2008, 01:27:09 UTC
*glee*

You know that any FB is welcome, anytime! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for making my night! :)

Reply


zooey_glass04 December 28 2008, 23:46:46 UTC
This is great! I love the idea of all the guns talking about the boys. And the thought of the Colt jamming to save Sam gives me a little lump in my throat <3

Lovely read, thanks!

Reply

girlguidejones December 29 2008, 02:54:25 UTC
Thanks! This is one of my favorites, just because of the format. Inanimate POVs are unusual, but four in one story...? Well, I liked it. Hee. Thanks for your feedback!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up