Call to Arms (The Gunpowder Remix) PG 13, Sam/Dean

Sep 07, 2008 23:03

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remix, my fic

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mresundance September 9 2008, 11:05:59 UTC
I fucking love this story. I love how you make it clear that their firearms are chatting amongst themselves. It's just. Awesome. I'm tickled.

It reminds me vaguely of an E. Annie Proulx short story in Bad Dirt, where a bunch of badgers sit and talk amongst themselves. It's a little cracky, but it's so well written I totally go with it. It's plausible with the set-up you've created.

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girlguidejones September 9 2008, 16:11:45 UTC
I fucking LOVE your comment. Hee. I'm glad the gun characters came through for you. Thank you so much!

:)

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chemm80 September 10 2008, 17:35:22 UTC
Holy crap, this cracked me up:

And I agree with Sig on one thing, at least...they’re usin’ too damn much oil. Anything needin’ that much lubrication is beyond functionality.”

Besides, anyone who carries his own personal ram and barrel swabber around with him has no room to be salacious at someone else’s expense.”

“Yep. Gotta re-prime first. Takin’ a lot longer than what it ought to, seems to me.”

Enjoyable throughout.

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girlguidejones September 10 2008, 23:58:47 UTC
Eeeeee! Icon love!

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for commenting! :)

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chemm80 September 11 2008, 00:30:20 UTC
The icon is from cakehole_cat. Isn't it gorgeous?

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girlguidejones September 11 2008, 23:35:49 UTC
I am definitely going to check out...her? his? stuff! Thanks! :)

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killabeez September 11 2008, 03:43:07 UTC
Oh, so cute, and I can honestly say it's a remix approach I've never seen before. :D I love your brain. And you are so, so sweet to think of me (thank you for your note!) -- you were so right, this made me smile. {{{{you all around}}}}

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girlguidejones September 11 2008, 23:38:29 UTC
N'aaawwwwwwwwwww. :D I admit to being a teensy bit proud of the format. I haven't been around fandom as long as some of y'all, but I felt fairly certain it was different from most approaches.

Thank you sweets! I'm glad to give you a grin. :)

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apreludetoanend September 11 2008, 04:27:00 UTC
This is so incredibly clever and fun! I love it, and I'm so impressed by all the little bits of sweetness and sadness and insight that you managed to tuck into the conversation.

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girlguidejones September 11 2008, 23:40:38 UTC
YAYE! Thank you, thank you. I'm so glad you said "insight". I was really hoping that the guns' familiarity with the Winchesters...and their ability to assess human nature...came through.

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apreludetoanend September 12 2008, 01:33:21 UTC
Loud and clear! =)

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trulybloom September 14 2008, 05:54:52 UTC
What a clever story! Really unique and well done. I loved all the different voices.

Thank you for sharing.

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girlguidejones September 16 2008, 20:47:48 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thank you for leaving a kind word!

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