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gioia_gg

New Unending ficlet

Mar 05, 2008 12:20

Title: Sleeping with Beauty
Author: Gioia
Rating: PG
Summary: "Love is stupid and it frightens him more than anything and that includs even the Ori but still, what would life would mean if your heart can't be hurt anymore and...suddenly his thoughts escape him as he looks to see Vala smiling at him. She truly has one of the most stunning smiles he ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

maevebran March 5 2008, 11:13:13 UTC

Very nice. I like the way you have Daniel analize why he has feeling for Vala when she is so different from Sha're.

gioia_gg May 22 2008, 06:20:41 UTC

thanks for reading and feedback

poundpuppy_29 March 6 2008, 00:25:16 UTC

Awesome Job loved how you got into Daniel's head.

new fic post Unending poundpuppy_29 March 6 2008, 18:18:39 UTC

Trying to leave a comment Gioia. Liked the fic, it had a nice thoughtful quality to it - almost dreamy but I guess we can imagine why. I'm not sure I'm posting in the right place but here goes. Mag.

Re: new fic post Unending gioia_gg May 22 2008, 06:22:36 UTC

It seems the right place, dear. But why don't you have a LJ account. It'd be better.

I'm glad that you liked it.

natalia5345 March 6 2008, 05:50:10 UTC

*is in awe at the amazingness of this*

love it so much oh my goodness. wow.

what a great way to end my night :)

great job!

gioia_gg May 22 2008, 06:26:33 UTC

aww *blushes* thank you for your kind words.

Sleeping with Beauty anonymous June 1 2008, 00:23:23 UTC

HI Gioia, I liked this one, you can feel Vala smile. "Would you prefer that I were more subtle?" Vala won't be ignored and it would take an all out brawiling fight and a kiss to get his attention. Mag.

skara_brae July 18 2008, 04:44:40 UTC

This is wonderful. I can really hear Daniel's voice.