Comments | giles_shorts: Ficlet: White Out (Giles, Xander) gen

il_mio_capitano in giles_shorts

Ficlet: White Out (Giles, Xander) gen

Feb 06, 2015 19:02

Title: White Out
Author: il_mio_capitano
Prompt: snow
Length: 940
Characters: Giles, Xander. FRT

( White Out... )

giles and xander, z_author:il-mio-capitano, rating: pg/frt

Comments 6

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il_mio_capitano February 7 2015, 10:33:22 UTC

Yup. He's slurpee now.

sparrow2000 February 7 2015, 12:45:51 UTC

That was great. Lovely descriptive writing at the start, then a sense of growing unease, then the 'eek' moment, and finally Xander with a flamethrower - what's not to love!

il_mio_capitano February 8 2015, 09:45:21 UTC

Thank you. I confess to being distracted by the image of Xander with a flamethrower. Very Ripley in Aliens I thought.

littleotter73 February 10 2015, 15:18:44 UTC

Love the feel of this! Very atmospheric. The sense of foreboding all the way through. I really enjoy it and Xander's heroic rescue at the end was excellent!

il_mio_capitano February 11 2015, 10:15:12 UTC

Many thanks for your support and encouragement.

Here from buffyversetop5 yourlibrarian January 4 2016, 17:26:54 UTC

It was Xander! Bloody magnificent, Xander! Triggering a flame thrower and looking for all the world like he was enjoying himself. “Take that, Frosty!”

Haha, nothing like saving one's hide to make one magnificent!