Just Maybe We Could Lose Ourselves This Time

[giddy_london]

Title: Just Maybe We Could Lose Ourselves This Time
Author: giddy_london
Pairing: Gerard/always a girl Frank
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4,600
WARNINGS: Het; Gerard is 21 and Frank is 17; unprotected sex; clichés abound! Also contains NSFW art!
Disclaimer: I do not know or own Frank Iero or Gerard Way or any member of My Chemical Romance. I am not making money

Comments

[silentdescant]

I didn't really get into what I love about this fic, so I'll do that now. I love Frankie's fuck-you kind of attitude at the beginning, and I really really love how she gets self-conscious when she takes her shirt off. And then Gerard trying to be a perfect gentleman, and that they have an adorable crush on each other. Plus, y'know, it's all really fucking hot. I like where the sequel's headed, too. :D

I am curious about Frankie's "I only did this once" bit. Who did she jerk off! hahaha

♥

[giddy_london]

Thank you again for looking over this for me! ♥

I think no matter if Frank's a dude or a girl, there's always going to be some element of 'fuck you' and I sort of like that in conjunction with the uncertainty here too. Plus, you know, Gerard. I'm having fun writing his POV for the followup.

Hee! I shall leave it to your imagination who Frankie might have messed around with once. I can guarantee you that it isn't Mikey, though!

[iamsupernova]

yes yes yes yes WORLDS OF YES. I worship at your altar of basement!Gerard/schoolgirl!Frankie. OM NOM NOM HET. I love how she's shy about being shirtless but when she gets comfortable it's so easy for them to go for it and get each other off and have sex, like it's right. Usually I get that sort of thing after a long plotty buildup with UST (I loooooove long UST!) but it's really nice to see it in a PWP without feeling skeevy.

Can't wait for the sequel!

[giddy_london]

Nobody doesn't love basement!Gerard and high school!Frankie. :D And I thought it might be fun to have Frank as a girl instead of Gerard, which seems to be slightly more common. I'm really glad you liked this, though! I get what you're saying about a long, plotty buildup with UST, because I love to read it, but I don't think I could ever write it. I'm thinking there might be a bit more plot in the followup, at least as it relates to how they feel about each other, but yeah, it's pretty much just a PWP snapshot as opposed to a larger 'verse. At least at this point...

Still working on the next bit, but it might be a while in coming.

[ciel_vert]

This was awesome dude, seriously. Cute and hot as hell! I can't wait to read the sequel.

[giddy_london]

Hee. I'm glad you liked it! Still working on the followup, but it'll probably be a while before I can get it posted.

[giddy_london]

\o/ I'm pleased that you enjoyed it! It was fun to write, and I never question it when I can write several thousand words at once!

[torturedbarbie]

Wow. Good fucking job.
I loved it.
And I cannot wait for the sequel.

[giddy_london]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the followup bit, so that'll be ready eventually.