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projectcyborg in getyourtoaster

porn: the sequel

Aug 27, 2007 21:04

Title: Arachne into a Spider [2/5]
Prompt: Roslin/Tory, files
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: through "Collaborators"
A/N: titles from Ovid's Metamorphoses (1717 translation, Pallas=Athena). thanks to iamsab and thassalia for beta testing, de-purpling, and overall smut-writing validation + inspiration. and, as always, to mandysbitch, who was there just when I needed her.
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p:laura/tory, by:projectjulie, 7:battle, r:nc17, .story

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projectcyborg September 1 2007, 20:10:19 UTC

thanks so much for your thoughtful feedback! I'm trying to play around with a world where Laura has a very hard time getting close to people, and think through what would break those walls down and what would send them back up. even canonically, even if you set aside the sex, Laura and Tory have such a complicated and fraught relationship. I'm glad the ending worked -- there were a lot of things I wanted Laura to explain, but I ended up just cutting them all out because she couldn't actually say them in words ( ... )

selenay_x August 28 2007, 20:27:55 UTC

Ooh. Hot and needy and fascinating. Seriously lost for words.

Apart from I'm so looking forward to the next three parts.

projectcyborg September 1 2007, 20:13:47 UTC

thank you! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it ;). there's something a little different coming next, but hopefully I can keep bringing the hot.

carla_scribbles August 29 2007, 00:07:58 UTC

This is so hot my mouth has literally gone dry. Guh.

projectcyborg September 1 2007, 20:14:17 UTC

mmmmmmm, yay! I'm happy to oblige.

frogfrizz August 30 2007, 22:55:34 UTC

*is brain-dead*

projectcyborg August 30 2007, 23:28:56 UTC

fair point >;). but you're not getting off (heh) that easy! you'd better be back with more feedback when you're back on your feet.

liverpool_ruth September 11 2007, 16:30:20 UTC

OMG.... I love this so much..... and have had the image of Laura pleasuring herself whilst Tory struggles to work - literally stuck in my head ALL DAY..... how I got any work done is a total mystery to me :)

I'm longing for more..... this is so wonderfully hot... and totally Tory.... and Laura trying so hard to remain aloof and failing miserably.....

God when Tory says....
"No, I can't work. I can't think. I can't breathe any more unless you frak me."
As Laura taunts her.... I'm all jelly... wanting Laura to just satisfy her (and me!) like NOW! :)

and then the sex on Laura's desk.... and Laura begging....
"Please," she said, breath hot at my ear, "frak me until I can't see."

Very, very wonderful. Really, really enjoyed.... and hanging out for more.... soon .... pretty please??

thanks
Ruth

projectcyborg September 11 2007, 18:11:10 UTC

this is exactly the effect I was striving for -- I'm thrilled that my dastardly plan was a success! I'm posting a new installment every four weeks, so you won't have too long to wait (the next two feature something a little different, though).

liverpool_ruth September 11 2007, 18:22:04 UTC

So your dastardly plan was to have people spending all day unable to think of anything but Laura and Tory?? Or more exactly Laura and Tory frakkin? Hmm.... definitely worked with me then :)

and yep will keep my eyes peeled for the next installment.

And once again.... enjoyed this very muchly :)

thanks
Ruth