sAYING I LOVE YOU.
anonymous
September 5 2006, 01:20:23 UTC
That was so beautiful .It made me cry. I can understand how Jack felt when suddenly Ennis said those magic words I am loving every wors of your story. Please don't stop it. There is a certain story out there that is discrediting the love the love Ennis and Jack have?had for each other becuse the perfect man who can't do or say no wrong was created for Ennis but this story is full of emotion and love and I can't get enough. Keep it coming
Re: sAYING I LOVE YOU.george66September 5 2006, 01:28:23 UTC
Jack,
Thank you so much for your comment!! I agree with you!! The love that Ennis and Jack has is so strong and so endless, they truly are each other soulmate. I always felt that if they could have found the words to say to each other how they felt they may have had the happy ending we all wanted! The new chapter is up!
This is absolutly stunning writing. A love story. The way you write makes all this so vividly real. Almost like a movie! I can see and feel it all. A big hurdle has been jumped here IMO with Ennis sweet confession of his deep love for Jack. Damn I could actually feel Jack's unexpected disbelief . Simply excellent writing style. Keep it up.
Re: Stunned!george66September 5 2006, 23:30:48 UTC
had2shots,
You are making me feel soooooo good!! My writing is vivid and excellent? I am sooo humble! I wanted to find away to make Ennis confession believable and real and I always felt that if he did it at long last Jack would be so thrown by it at first that he would have to take a moment to really believe it.
Thank you again for reading and leaving a comment.
Dear George, there is nothing to be scared of, you are home in BBM zone. It's amazingly sensitive piece of writing, simple( remember, beauty is in simplicity )flowing straightforwardly, with easy saying what was unsaid in the movie. As first part make me smile and second shiver, the next two I read with chest tightening- almost crying, ...Ennis had to turn his face in shame. Shame that he waited for so long to speak, to put into words what both men have felt every since that summer on Brokeback. Shame that when he finally had the courage to say them, Jack is too afraid to believe them. I have no better words to describe painful core ( at least for me)of the story than those yours
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First its never too late for me to hear the comments of others about my story! Never, never!!
Second thank you so much for your comments! I still regard myself a novice when it comes to writing so I do try to be as simple as possible but I think you are right about how we can see beauty in the simplicity and for you to think there is beauty in my writing makes me very humble indeed!!
Third yes my e-mail works but to be certain here it is again: darrellmoo@aol.com
At the moment I'm at a crossroad with the story. Currently working on chapter seven I'm not sure what I want to do with the boys but I can't see them making me give them an unhappy ending.
~Such a beautiful story George!! You got me hooked up on your writing, you really are amazing. :-) Now tell me, did you post other chapters? Coz if you did, I would surely LOVE to read those too, since you wrote TBC at the end of this chapter.~
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Thank you so much for your comment!! I agree with you!! The love that Ennis and Jack has is so strong and so endless, they truly are each other soulmate. I always felt that if they could have found the words to say to each other how they felt they may have had the happy ending we all wanted!
The new chapter is up!
GEORGE
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Ennis, you sweet talker( knew you had it in ya!).
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You are making me feel soooooo good!! My writing is vivid and excellent? I am sooo humble! I wanted to find away to make Ennis confession believable and real and I always felt that if he did it at long last Jack would be so thrown by it at first that he would have to take a moment to really believe it.
Thank you again for reading and leaving a comment.
GEORGE
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there is nothing to be scared of, you are home in BBM zone. It's amazingly sensitive piece of writing, simple( remember, beauty is in simplicity )flowing straightforwardly, with easy saying what was unsaid in the movie. As first part make me smile and second shiver, the next two I read with chest tightening- almost crying,
...Ennis had to turn his face in shame. Shame that he waited for so long to speak, to put into words what both men have felt every since that summer on Brokeback. Shame that when he finally had the courage to say them, Jack is too afraid to believe them. I have no better words to describe painful core ( at least for me)of the story than those yours ( ... )
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First its never too late for me to hear the comments of others about my story! Never, never!!
Second thank you so much for your comments! I still regard myself a novice when it comes to writing so I do try to be as simple as possible but I think you are right about how we can see beauty in the simplicity and for you to think there is beauty in my writing makes me very humble indeed!!
Third yes my e-mail works but to be certain here it is again:
darrellmoo@aol.com
At the moment I'm at a crossroad with the story. Currently working on chapter seven I'm not sure what I want to do with the boys but I can't see them making me give them an unhappy ending.
Thanks for reading my story.
GEORGE
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Unfinished stories are so ....... unfinished. Kinda like real life.
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