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Jan 17, 2010 14:44

I really want to believe this is a person trolling but unfortunately it probable isn't. Really bad fic. Originally posted at another community. And it's Sess/Kagome.

( he is shocked that she loves him when he realizes his feelings for her he tells her his feelings for her and they kiss )

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lilbrokendolly January 17 2010, 20:12:41 UTC

I always hate to feel like the judgemental asshole when I read someone's fic and it's one of *those*. Bad grammar (and I'm cool with international writers not having perfect English, I'm not a freakin' language nazi), no plotline, OOC characters so far removed from anything even remotely resembling in-universe reality, and what amounts to sheer idiocy leading to some physical contact between characters. Or confessions of love...or both. Argh. Then they almost always say "Review!" Um, no, you really don't want me to do that ( ... )

empath_eia January 17 2010, 20:47:11 UTC

Oh nooooooooooo. It reads like a plot outline with all the punctuation removed, the horror.

geofount January 18 2010, 19:56:47 UTC

It's terrible. Like you don't even need to read the fic cause she put everything in the summary. Small miracles I guess? :P

questofdreams January 18 2010, 03:57:42 UTC

I don't know, that sounds like a rather convincing troll to me XD But maybe that's just wishful thinking? lol

geofount January 18 2010, 19:58:35 UTC

I really can't decide though I have the sinking suspicion that it's probably for real real. Too bad, if it were a troll it would be around the same epicness as "My Immortal" for Harry Potter.