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BIG Trouble (Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde)

Dec 03, 2009 22:55

Title: BIG Trouble (Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde)
Summary: When a mad scientist gets his hands on Doyle and Angel and uses them as test subjects, who exactly will Cordelia be saving?
Rating: R
Characters: Angel, Angelus, Doyle, Evil!Demon!Doyle, and Cordelia
Words: 2,655

( BIG Trouble... )

one-shot, angelus, author: badgirl2bad4you, ats: s1, doyle, cordelia, angel

Comments 2

rebcake December 4 2009, 05:45:01 UTC

I liked the addition, which made their situation even more dire. I also noticed on this read how silly (if dangerous) their Hyde versions are here. It's the monologuing that gets those evil not-so-geniuses everytime!

badgirl2bad4u December 4 2009, 11:18:42 UTC

Thanks honey! :D I had so much more I was going to do with this one but since I had to constantly shave it down while writing it to keep it under 2,000 words, it lost a lot of the darker side it would have had for both of them.

And LMAO I know! I was thinking, how would Angelus and an Evil!Demon!Doyle interact together? What would they discuss? And how would Cordy manage to get away? I figured if they were too occupied with joking around and plotting, completely confident that they had the situation under control, it would provide the perfect opportunity for her ;) Yes, monologuing is an evil mastermind's worst enemy. haha